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thepromisedneverland

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Beautifully written ๐Ÿ’“

This story left me wanting for more! The writing was captivating and it got me hooked instantly ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป The transitions from different ideologies (Like the church, state/government and mythology) was flawless ๐Ÿ”ฅ Great job, Author ๐Ÿ’“ I hope youโ€™ll continue this beautiful book๐Ÿ“š

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Haunting... but in a beautiful way

This is a must read. Beautifully written. Plot is solid and each chapter will keep you wanting for more. ๐Ÿ’“ Great job author. I hope you update soon because Iโ€™m feeling major twist are going to happen! ๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

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Smooth

The plot is great, the flow of the story is smooth and the writing style is solid. Great job author! The dynamic between the characters and the transition between different scenes was done effortlessly. I was hooked on the first chapter because of the descriptions. A little polishing on the grammar and punctuations is needed, and some complex sentences can be broken down into simple and precise sentences, but overall, this is great story! ๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“ Keep writing and inspiring Author๐Ÿ’“

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A breath of fresh air! Captivating!

From the first chapter, I was instantly hooked. Most readers give Greek Mythology a pass because for them itโ€™s โ€always the sameโ€. If you want something different this highly recommended book is perfect for YOU! ๐Ÿ’“ Beautifully written, amazing descriptions and cool references! Keep inspiring and keep up the good work author! ๐Ÿ’“ Looking forward to your updates!

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