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thepromisedneverland

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Beautifully written πŸ’“

This story left me wanting for more! The writing was captivating and it got me hooked instantly πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ» The transitions from different ideologies (Like the church, state/government and mythology) was flawless πŸ”₯ Great job, Author πŸ’“ I hope you’ll continue this beautiful bookπŸ“š

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HOLY MOTHER OF GOD. THIS IS HIGHLY RECOMMENDED

Author. THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST DETECTIVE STORY I’VE READ IN A WHILE. MY GOODNESS THIS IS A 360 RIDE OF EMOTIONS I CANNOT PUT IT DOWN. All caps because the feels are soo intense!!!!! The plot is STRONG and SOLID. Characters aw well described and written. I LOVE STRONG FEMALE LEADS!!! πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“ KEEP AT IT!!!! πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

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Haunting... but in a beautiful way

This is a must read. Beautifully written. Plot is solid and each chapter will keep you wanting for more. πŸ’“ Great job author. I hope you update soon because I’m feeling major twist are going to happen! πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

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Smooth

The plot is great, the flow of the story is smooth and the writing style is solid. Great job author! The dynamic between the characters and the transition between different scenes was done effortlessly. I was hooked on the first chapter because of the descriptions. A little polishing on the grammar and punctuations is needed, and some complex sentences can be broken down into simple and precise sentences, but overall, this is great story! πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“ Keep writing and inspiring AuthorπŸ’“

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Enthralling!

If you’re a sucker anything supernatural like witches and the like, this book is a MUST READ! πŸ₯° The prologue got me, which is a yes for every writer because it shows that you manage to captivate or pique your reader’s interest. The plot is promising, the writing style shows how much effort the author puts into it. Just a little polishing on the grammar and some punctation placings your very good to go! I CAN’T WAIT TO READ MORE πŸ₯°πŸ˜πŸ₯°πŸ˜ Keep writing and inspiring author! 😍

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A breath of fresh air! Captivating!

From the first chapter, I was instantly hooked. Most readers give Greek Mythology a pass because for them it’s ”always the same”. If you want something different this highly recommended book is perfect for YOU! πŸ’“ Beautifully written, amazing descriptions and cool references! Keep inspiring and keep up the good work author! πŸ’“ Looking forward to your updates!

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