Lauren

•20 •College Student •Fantasy enthusiast My works and profile are also available on Wattpad as lau-ren-tia. I’m very much new to Inkitt!

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Fluid

Engaging writing style with no noticeable errors! I can tell you have been writing for a long time. I enjoyed the fluidity of the writing and how it was easy to understand the unique terms that you were presenting without need for over-explanation. You were able to portray the main characters personality and traits in only one chapter which is testimony to your great writing style.

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Loved it!

I definitely enjoyed reading this book so far. The grammar is perfect, which is something I usually pick up on quickly. I laughed quite a bit. I enjoy erotica, however, my only criticism I'd like to see more development in the relationship and characters along with the smut scenes. The development may come in later chapters as I've only read the five that are up so far so I will stay tuned and read on as it is updated!

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Engaging from the outset!

I thoroughly enjoyed the action from the beginning! I'm quite a nit-pick when it comes to grammar and I can say that this book is very well written and engaging.

I will most definitely continue as it is updated!

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More!

This story is exactly the kind I would go for. I love the strong female protagonist fighting against oppression. I have no criticisms by the way of grammar or punctuation, it's beautifully written. There is only one chapter so far but I can tell the quality of this book for the future, and so my review has hopefully reflected that.

Recommend for all fantasy lovers!

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Amazing

I love your take on the bad boy romance. It's new and refreshing! I really enjoyed the writing and the humour and I have no criticisms by way of grammar or punctuation. I'm very much enjoying the plot of this story and I'd like to see where it goes

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Utterly Unique

This is unlike anything I have ever read before. The setting for the story is completely unique with an amazing backstory of another world which I can’t wait to see become incorporated in the novel! The writing is consistently good and I didn’t notice any obvious mistakes.

I’m definitely looking forward to seeing where this story goes!

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Interesting

I like where the story is going and I can see it being something I would like to read. I noticed a few grammatical errors but overall it was well written and a good starting point for a novel

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Amazing!

Fantasy is my favourite genre so I very much enjoyed this book. The chapters are well-written and engaging. I liked that there is some background to the characters as they grew up. This is definitely my kind of book, so I'll be waiting for more!

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