Lau

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Nice start!

I am truly enjoying this book so far. I like the idea of the plot and how different the characters seem from one another. I do feel like you could improve your grammar in some places - for example, you sometimes tend to switch from the past tense to the present tense. Also, I feel like you meant to say conscience instead of conscious. I really liked the conflict between Emma and her inner self, though.

Great work, keep it up! Excited to see where this is going.

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