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a Memoir of Self

This is a story of a child who experiences sadness and pain at such a young age. I wanted to know who 'she' was, perhaps a name. I guess the plot will build up. I am not able to rate this story after reading only 4 chapters. I would like to read more as it comes. Perhaps more dialogues, e.g. her brothers' screaming out at her or how her siblings reacted vocally, would bring the scenes alive. Just my thought.

Overall a good start.

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Interesting start

The 5 chapters have given an interesting start to the fantasy adventure novel.

Though I am not into fantasy genre, I found the pace of the writing to be smooth. The characters intrigued me. It left me wanting to read more. The author' writing skills were up to the mark and his writing style was captivating.
Overall a must read for all.

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To love so pure

The author has done a good job at starting the story. Since there are only 4 chapters there I could not rate the plot properly. Her writing style is clear and was engaging. I liked the way she has developed Caroline's character and I'd like to read more of the book.

There were some minor spelling mistakes where upper cases were involved. But these could be easily corrected.

Overall an interesting story. Keep up the good work!

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Good start

The author has set the stage well to begin her story. The boy she is bumping into constantly intrigued me. Her writing style is smooth and easy to read. I can't wait to see what happens next since there were only 4 chapters posted.

I wanted to read how Emma looks like e.g. her physical attributes, etc. which makes her confident to want to be a top end model.

Overall it has promises to be a good story. Keep up the good work.

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The road that went write - review

Thoroughly enjoyed reading the book. Though fantasy isn't my genre, I found this book to be really engaging. It story flowed well. I began to like Whilo, Alder and Lilly too. It took me to fantasy land for a while.

One thing I noticed was that the whole story was one long chapter which could be broken down easily.
Otherwise keep up the good work.

Btw, as we are always looking for reviewers at Inkitt, grateful if you could check out mine at https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/123746. It's not 100% romance but deals with family expectations.

Thanks.

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Sweet n bitter= Review

I was pulled into Rosalyn's life from the beginning. Her portrayal as a mother and a grandmother was excellent.Since there were only a few chapters, Her portrayal as a homemaker was good and one could feel her closeness to the kids I have yet to learn the plot and look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.

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When I met you - review

The story intrigued me from the beginning. I liked her writing style. It left me wondering whether they would be able to meet again after the one night stand. There were only 2 chapters to read and I wanted to read more. Saw some grammatical errors which can be easily fixed. overall a good story.

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A lustful soul - review

The story intrigued me wondering why the protagonist was mentally and physically stressed. She was just a normal teenager but psychologically tormented with her ex-lover. I also liked the way the story flowed flawlessly. Overall an interesting story.

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Exciting start

Though there were only two chapters to read, I found the story rather scintillating. Kiara is a tough woman and she poses a threat to men like Isaac who touches and harasses her the moment they meet thinking her to be a staff instead of the boss he was about to meet. The plot is intriguing as one can imagine how she will handle Isaac. The author has a strong writing style pulling me right into the scene. There were some typos which can be easily rectified.

Overall, I wanted to read more. Keep on writing.

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Dark paradise

Since there was only a chapter to read, I could not rate the story well. I liked the way she tells us about herself and the dilemma she's undergoing. The way she describes the boy was almost poetic. The plot is yet to unfold and I want to read what happens next. There are some grammatical errors which can be easily rectified. Keep writing. I enjoyed reading it.

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Whisper of the Silence

Wow that was a great start. I loved the way the story picked up speed to take me flying with Clover all along. The story plot intrigued me from the beginning. I must say your writing style is commendable and smooth. I read it with almost no effort enjoying each word.

It was good to see Clover escape those goons. There is a great deal of excitement. You've staged the scene perfectly. I wait to read more. Excellent piece of work. Keep up the good work.

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Review

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It was racy and I couldn't put it down. I had to complete it at one go. A rather intriguing plot, I should say. Love and romance with mystery and drama makes this story worth reading. I saw some spelling errors which could be easily fixed. Overall a great story. Keep up the good work.

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Review forOne step

The chapters were smooth and easy to read. It was enjoyable and sad at the same time. Sad because the child was abused by her own family members. It has an intriguing story plot which makes me wonder what happens next.

Keep up the good work.

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Excellet

I thoroughly enjoyed reading 'Dead or Alive'. The age factor comes into strong play here. The author has described old age, sickness, physical and health problems relating to age perfectly. The story plot is intriguing and the writing style is impeccable. It's a fantastically woven story and i'd recommend it to all readers. Thanks for the excellent piece of work. Good Luck.

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Different

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story even though it was only 4 chapters. The pacing and the plot of the story was excellent. I want to know what happens next. Will her brother Blake return at the door? Will she fall in love with Caleb? Was her boyfriend responsible for her brother's accident? So many questions. Overall a very interesting book. Keep up the good work.

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White blood cells review

Your title intrigued me. I think the blurb could be improved to make it more attractive to readers. I liked the way the story unfolds with Alex's sickness slowly building up the momentum. I couldn't rate the story properly as it has only two chapters so far. It made me want to know what happens next. Overall an interesting story - keep up the good work.

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Tears in the rain

I felt myself wet standing in the rain. Good pace and well written. I would have liked to read a little background to the story which is making her sad and suicidal. I enjoyed reading your story and do keep on writing more.

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Review

I fell in love with the poetry within the story and the beautiful description of traffic lights cascading into the room was great. This has left me wanting to read more. Thanks.

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One fifty four

I found the dialogues very interesting. The story touches on life and sickness. It left me wanting to know more. A goo beginning.

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Match made

I like the story a great deal. The pace was excellent and I finished the book at one go. The characters were rather interesting. Greg was the alpha male and Donna was beautiful, successful. It was interesting to note that arranged marriages amongst the rich prevail. Please keep on writing.

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Art trap

The story intrigued me from the start. The pace was smooth throughout. The interactions between the ghosts from the past and the souls living within Maya and Jai were gripping. There were some grammatical errors which could be easily improved. Overall an enjoyable read.

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Opus

'Opus' captures the life of author Alex Payton in minute detail. He is lonely in pursuit of creative writing and becomes increasingly restless even after his book 'Shades of the Earth' becomes a bestseller. Though his writing career has taken off, he feels he could write better books. He yearns for Cara, his estranged lover. One can taste the lonely life of a writer in the story. Overall a good read.

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Unbroken

'Unbroken' is a story of a young girl who faces all odds in life from the time she is born. Her alcoholic mother who leaves her behind to be cared for by her grandmother, the gang rape which makes her pregnant and the fact that she couldn't bring Jasper, the rapist, to justice makes her a heart broken person. But her son, Jordan gives her some hope to live on. Their moving to Vegas give us some hope to be optimistic. As the story is still in its 4th chapter, I couldn't rate the story well. The plot is yet to be delivered but I loved her writing style and the flow she gave. I'm not sure I came across the name of the protagonist, If not, then perhaps her name should appear earlier on. I look forward to reading more of the story and do keep on writing.

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Fate

I really enjoyed reading 'Fate' though only 2 chapters were posted. Braden and Taylor's love for each other and how it came to an abrupt end was heart breaking. The plot intrigued me and I want to know what happens next. Overall, a great story that all should read. Keep up the good work! Thanks.

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Slippered

This was a very humorous piece of work that I enjoyed from the start to the end. The characters were drawn well with an intriguing plot. Slipper carried the story through till the end. Overall it was an enjoyable read.

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Hallucinations of Normalcy

This is a story of war and the adverse effect it has on its protagonist, Harry. The soldiers have been subject to live killings and the trauma of being killed would always haunt them. The author has described the war scene very explicitly. Harry is being haunted by his elder brother, Richard who hangs around and talk to him in the trench. Later his other brother, Tom dies in the fight and he keeps on seeing both of them. Harry must be afraid of the war and he imagines both his dead brothers coming to him.
The first chapter was too long which could be further divided. The second chapter too short Overall the story has a good plot which made interesting reading.

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Love for Janie

It was a lovely romantic story that took my heart away. It's a story about love that is above everything and in this case race and hatred. Janie is the tender loving person who happens to fall in love with Chuck. Her neighbours show cruelty towards Janie and her lover and goes to hideous length to destroy them both physically and mentally. The other characters like her sister Julie, his parents and Fanny have been etched as warm and human. I liked the ending too. Overall a romantic story with a strong message. Keep up the good work.

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Stormlock

A very well written short story. I liked the pace and the plot of the story which kept me reading and wanting to read more. Though I do not read this genre, I found this story an interesting piece of work. Well done.

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Lost

The story drew me in through its story telling which was smooth and flowed easily. The sad announcement of the girl's dreadful illness at such a young age and her wanting to hide it from all except Brandon was quite painful indeed. I want to know how long she will be able to keep this a secret. Will she fall in love with Brandon and will this be able to miraculously make her alright? A good read so far. Keep it up!

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Nobody's boy

The author's writing style came out to me as very crisp. It made me keep on reading effortlessly. It has an interesting plot. It makes me wonder what will happen next, whether the pig will eventually be destroyed and most of all whether the kids will regain their normalcy at all now that the doctor has died. Very interesting piece of work and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

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The season of the caterpilla

This was one of the most interesting story I've read so far in this community. The pace was good and I liked the way the different parts of the story with its characters was intricately woven. The emotions of love, loneliness, ageing and the dynamics of family relationship was brilliantly shown. Being new to the writing arena, I'm not an expert in technical skills. Overall an interesting drama with a satisfying ending. Thank you.

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Smile old heart

Overall it was a captivating story. The bullying at school was well crafted. Allen was shown as a hard core bully who changed his ways falling in love with Maydee. Despite some typos and grammatical errors I liked the flow of the story.

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Girl who lived in the shadow

You have a great beginning there and I also liked the way your story flowed along. You have a great plot going and I would love to read more. Despite some spelling errors which can be corrected, it should be a good read when complete. Good work.

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Graceland 101

I would have liked to read a precise summary of the 3 stories in the beginning to keep the readers in the loop of what was going to happen in brief. The plot was building up with the different POVs leaving me guessing what was going to happen next. The writing style was good except for some grammatical errors which can be improved. The dialogues should be in inverted commas. As this story is a work in progress, I would like to read more.

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An Assasin's tale

A highly entertaining novel. Enjoyed reading it from start to finish. It felt as if the author was telling his own story to a greater extent and felt like watching a Hollywood thriller. Absolutely loved it.

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Medusa

This was a very intriguing story. It had a good flow giving it an easy read. The author gave in depth description of Hong Kong and Japan. The story had a good plot and his writing style was smooth. Overall a great job. Keep it up.

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Forevermore

Since the work is under progress, I didn't know how to rate this overall. The plot of the story is yet to unfold. Some work need to be done on the grammar front. Otherwise a nice story taking shape there. Thanks.

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Missing

Two things that caught my eyes were the title 'Missing' and the cover of woods. It has an interesting plot of an adult woman missing - in this a mother and not the usual young boy or girl. Perhaps a stronger first sentence or two to make a gripping effect would be beneficial. The flow and the pace of the story was good. As the story is still in the making, I couldn't rate the overall story properly but this was a good start. I wanted to read more to find out the puzzle like the protagonist. Excellent story in the making - keep up the good work

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The great falling plan from down under

The story pulled me right from the start despite having read only 4 chapters posted. The first chapter was a bit slow but from the third chapter onwards, the pace picked up. There were some spelling mistakes which could be rectified. Otherwise a good story plot and I look forward to reading some more.

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Gunslinger

Wow that was a good start. Having just read the first chapter posted, I was hesitant to rate the overall story just yet. The pace of the story and the descriptions of the places was excellent. I was literally drawn to the scene and wanted to read more. I wanted to see the protagonist - so perhaps the author could have given his physical description too in this chapter. Otherwise keep up the good work with your superb writing style.

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Trouble

The story had a smooth flow to it. Except for a few spellings (e.g. waste for waist) it had a good plot. Overall it was a well crafted story.

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The Wright Life

The protagonist has been crafted as a kind person who cares for people who are suffering. Despite being a rich person, he is shown as someone who is a giver, one who helps the downtrodden. I wish there were more people like him in real life. The corporate scene was aptly described and the story's pace was good. Overall a well crafted story.

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A moment of weakness

A story of a guy finding out his girl friend was cheating on him when he was about to propose to her. She denies having cheated on him as she accepts the ring. There is only one chapter available so am looking forward to reading the rest of the story which could shed more light on the plot. Small grammatical errors could be rectified. Otherwise a good start to the story.

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The S Girl

Enjoyed reading this spy thriller with it's strong character (Saravi) who stole the limelight from the start. I liked the way she handled the whole story with it's plot. It was a thoroughly enjoyable book. Despite some grammatical errors which could be easily corrected, I am sure readers will enjoy reading the book. Keep up the good work.

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Stop wishing

I enjoyed reading the story of young people involved, especially their feelings of love and death. Some attention need to be given on the spellings. Overall it had a good plot. Keep on writing.

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Live Again

A very catchy ad interesting novel indeed! The writing style and the plot of the story kept me wanting to read till the end. She has a natural flair for writing. I'd like to read more of her books.

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SWALK

Sealed with a loving kiss - what a nice title. The story has an easy flow and I enjoyed reading it till the last word. A love story set in war torn Ireland. Despite death occurring at every nook and corner, it's gratifying to see how people learn to cope with it and find love to stabilise their lives. Excellent story. Keep it coming!

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Lights in the night

I truly enjoyed reading this book. Your writing style was appealing. I couldn't stop turning the pages. Though not a Sci-fi fan, I enjoyed the plot. Well paced and interesting. Can't wait to read more of your books.

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Keep your promises

I enjoyed reading the chapter. It has an easy flow to it. The plot was interesting and the part when her sister is relating the secret - I couldn't stop reading the passage till the end. I want to know what happens next. Apart from some grammatical corrections, I found the story telling interesting so far. It's interesting to read about the vulnerability of the sisters. Keep up the good work.

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Interesting family drama

Thoroughly enjoyed going through the story. It is an interesting read which kept me wondering what happens to poor Dylan and whether the truth would finally come out. It was a painful drama for him as he suffered silently not knowing what happened in the accident. I liked Jack's portrayal as the spoilt child and the ending was a thrill.
Overall a fine story. Keep up the good work!

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Superb

I've always been interested in reading stories set in Mongolia and this story took to over to the deserts, the wilderness, land of horses, wandering herdsmen, magic, supernatural elements, love, destiny, heartbreak and more. The dialogues were beautifully crafted. It was a journey of a young woman who marries the head of a tribe and is expected to give birth to his heirs. The extreme lengths to which she goes through to keep the baby in her womb alive shows her commitment towards her husband left me wondering was it all worth it? In that situation, she had almost no choice and it was painful for her. I had to read the story till the end to satisfy myself.

I would like to highly recommend this story to all who love romance and fantasy.

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Peculiar n Familiar

I liked the story plot and the way gets you into her story telling. Finished reading both chapters and I can't wait to read more. The author's writing style is smooth and easy to follow. I would like to recommend it to everyone who loves romance. Thanks.

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Meant to be - review

Interesting plot. It kept be wondering why she was made to visit England and her parents coming later to join her. Noticed a few grammatical errors which can be easily amended. Would like to read more.

Meanwhile, a good start, keep on writing.

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The beautiful adventure - review

Liah is on a vacation and she meets this handsome local boy who falls for her. I feel there must be more chapters coming up. The author's writing style is good except for some minor spelling and grammatical errors which can be easily corrected.

I would like to read what happens to Liah. Will she return for him?

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Alice

I really enjoyed reading this book which took me physically over to the bar where the story takes place. The plot intrigued me from the beginning to the end. My heart went out to Ali who under went great pains to be with the one she loved. Her marriage wasn't working but she had endured it all along. The chemistry between Ali and Rey was strong. They were definitely made for each other. Her writing style is immaculate. It flowed perfectly while I enjoyed the whole story page by page. The ending was unexpected. I'm waiting for the second part. Do let me know when you do. Overall a great romance to read.

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Elevated

I found myself going through the pages with ease and interest. Cassandra is a beautiful, strong and a billionaire. Her strength of character is shown very well when she deals with her staff. The story plot is intriguing making me wonder the the story goes once she meets with Harrison. He is undergoing a failing relationship with Josephine which just sets the ball rolling for the two to meet.

I can't wait to read more since only 4 chapters are posted now. Overall a really interesting story. Cheers.

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Soul Trees

I found this to be an intriguing tale of love and family. The plot unwinds in a mysterious way. I found the love and attraction between Boone and August to be well drawn out. I have only read 5 chapters and I wanted to write a review based on them. I want to know what happens next. The flow of the story is smooth and easy.. I liked the way the story was presented.

Keep up the good work.

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Review

The story has humour. The story plot is building up and since there is only one chapter, I couldn't rate it based on the whole story. Overall a good start.

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A diary

It has a strong beginning. Since there were only 3 chapters, I couldn't do a proper overall rating. I wanted to read more and wonder what happens next. I really liked reading the poetry on the 3rd chapter which was superb. Other than that saw some grammatical errors which can be easily rectified. Please keep on writing.

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The Sight

I found the story to be well paced and easy reading with an intriguing plot. I'm assuming there are more chapters coming up and if that's the case, I look forward to reading it.

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Blindsided

The story has an interesting start which kept me intrigued. The pace was good. I wanted to know what would happen next.

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The color of Jadeite

This is an excellent piece of work. It has kept be intrigued from the start. I loved the way the author has handled the story with an interesting plot as well as the almost perfect pace. It's definitely a work of a seasoned writer. I've personally enjoyed the four chapters that I've read so far. Great work..

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Until the snow melts

The story had some beautiful poetic descriptions that melted my heart. An example : 'the wet fists of the sky' describing the rain as Annikki's husband physically abuses her. Despite murdering Peter, she stills misses him and how she wished life would be normal again for her and her family. Saga, her child, was taken away from her. The maternal instinct of how she misses her only child is described at its best. She is able to give shelter to Orlaith and Elody which shows her generosity toward a desperate mother and child. Annikki could see a battered woman who was running away from abuse. Overall I story intrigued me and made me wanting to know what happens next.

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ACE

I found this to be a rather gripping story from the start. There were only 2 chapters posted but I could relate to some incidents there. I smiled to myself when she describes her father as a 'pansy'. Though fantasy isn't my genre, I found the second chapter quite exciting when I learn that they belong to a family of witches!

I really don't mind reading this book as a whole so do let me know when you complete it. Overall a fantastic start to your novel. I think you are a talented writer. Keep writing.

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Hleo

Though this is not the genre that I go for, Hleo captivated me from the start with beautiful descriptions and great dialogues. Hannah was the normal teenager who secretly loved Ethan from the first time she saw him at the shop. I loved the author's writing style and her story telling skill was excellent. I wanted to know whether Hannah's father knew about the Hleo and would have loved to see him return to the story. Overall a nicely written story which is recommended to all YA readers.

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3 of 10

It has an interesting beginning where a breakfast meeting is set up between two important characters. It has an intriguing plot and makes me want to read more. The author's writing style drew me in. Thanks.

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Dude Smith

This is a story of a man in search of his one true love. In this journey he overcomes great pain and heartaches. Dude impressed me from the start to the end. His characterization was fascinating. An alpha
male, rich, handsome, sexy and a woman-eater! Despite loving various women simultaneously, he was still searching for that true love. Having said that, his carnal desires were insatiable. His differing
personas as Dude and Darren makes him highly complicated. I could love and hate him at the same time. But I loved the way he treats his lovers with compassion and takes the responsibility of his sons.
Dude is an irresistible young man and has a way with women.

The relationship between Kay and Jacob was also well drawn up. I kept turning the pages wondering how it would end. My heart was in my mouth toward the end of the story. Dude was certainly going haywire and the ending was a thriller indeed.

I would like to recommend this romantic drama to all who loves an intriguing story.

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Nicely written

This is a well written piece of story and the author's writing style drove me into it right from the beginning. The pace was good and the characters were well drawn. It's a pity to find parents have a strong hold on their children especially Aileen who seemed to need help right from the start. The arrangement of shoes in her house, the way her mother taught her, made her what she had become as an adult. This made way for her family and marriage to break up. Roxy, who was abused as a child by her parents, was also a sad case. Overall I enjoyed reading the story and hope to read more. Thanks.

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Family Honor

This story delves in relationship between siblings, the protectiveness and the closeness between the brothers. Perhaps some improvement could be made in the narrative style to let the readers know a little bit on the background - but then it's only me. Drugs and alcoholism for youth remains a challenge and the author has described it in a nice way. Overall I found this quite an interesting piece of writing.

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Mystery of the fat cat

Since there was only a chapter to read, I could not rate this story well. I began to like the cat in the story and would like to read more. There were some grammatical errors which can be sorted out. Keep on writing and thanks.

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Masks of morality

A very well written book with messages to the world. The message of parenting, sacrifice, love for children, humanity, politics, environmental issues and career to name a few. Claryssa is every working mother in the modern world who is torn between her career and her family - she was lucky to choose the latter. Most women can't afford to make such choices. It's more so in the present context when almost every girl is educated and chooses to work. My heart went out to Alexandra - what good is all the material wealth to a mother who misses her only child. That was a very touching scene to read. Overall, as a mother myself, I found the story true and life-like and I wish you luck in your endeavour!

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The courage

This is a really good piece of work on war and its effect on the soldiers. Jacques is a tortured soul and I guess that is what war does to the young men's psyche. The portrayal of killing and brutality is shown very well here. My heart goes out to Jacques and the shocking experience he had to endure. I would love to read more of his work.

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The heiress

The story drew me in right from the first chapter. It had the right flow and the characters were drawn intricately. The physical attraction between Emma and Nikolai and her mother with her lover were exciting to say the least. The plot was intriguing as a spy thriller should be. Her writing style was excellent, except for a few typos which could be easily corrected. I will not comment on the technical aspects as I'm not an expert on this. Overall I enjoyed the story very much and would recommend others to read it too. Thanks.

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Silex

The first para really drew me in when the author describes the woman's soft peaceful features and suddenly I understand she's dead and lying on the snow. I also liked the phrase - the contrast of red blood on the white snow - which tells of the murders that had taken place. Another phrase that caught me was 'youth still lived on his face'. These were beautifully crafted words and paved way for the plot to take its course. The author' writing style is descriptive and poetic. I look forward to read what happens to Lotharan and Morgan.

Overall a great start and a wonderful piece of work.

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Killer Antonio

The story line and its plot kept me intrigued throughout. It was very well written with a smooth pace. The characters were well portrayed. I would like to read more from the author. Well done.

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Warrior of carnage

The story has an interesting plot with a good beginning. The writing style was captivating. Being a draft, there were some grammatical errors which can be rectified. Otherwise I found the story worth reading for and look forward to read more.

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Heat

This story took me to Africa and the people living out there. I learnt a bit about Apartheid and the author's views about the strangeness of the land. It was filled with emotions and feelings of love, lust and emptiness of it all. Mariah's sufferings were unbearable in her quest of love and understanding of herself. Some paras brought out poetry in itself. Most of all the domestic and sexual violence she experienced as a child showed up in her adult life. It's a good read and I've enjoyed the story.

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New

The story has a good plot and has an equally good reading pace. The characters seem real to me. I wanted to see more physical description in order to relate further. So far the beginning 9 chapters have been interesting leaving me wanting to read more. Keep up the good work.

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Secrets on the wall Book 1

The story had a good plot and I enjoyed reading it. The part when the girls' got into the paintings was really intriguing. The characters came out well and alive. For me it was delightful reading going back to my childhood era.

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Before the healing

The story had a good pace and an easy flow which made reading enjoyable. It had an interesting plot of romance as an undercurrent throughout the story. Macy was portrayed as a sweet and lovable young girl. She was searching for love till the end of the story. The dialogues were well written. I would love to read more of her writings in the future.

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Searching for Eden

A thoroughly engaging story. I was hooked from the beginning to the end. It was beautifully written and the characters came out alive in the story. For me it was more like watching a cinema unfold itself. I look forward to reading more of his work.

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Nights with the bitch

A nice beginning to the story. Only 4 chapters has been posted so far so it's a bit too early to say how the story goes. The story is well paced and I want to read more when you are done. Keep up the good work.

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The fire

A story of an everyday person. Loved the way the office was described in all it's 'grayness'. In the end it's only the family that matters. In this story, his wife and child were both saved to begin a new life afresh. A sense of optimism prevailed. Your writing style is superb. I want to read more from her.

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A new beginning

A touching story indeed! Poverty and its effect on a family has been projected beautifully. The author has been successful in bringing about feelings of love and hardship. She has set the stage for a strong novel. I look forward to reading more. I'm sure the technical side could be brushed up easily.

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Diary of a lost girl

I was pulled into the story right from the start. The story telling pace was excellent. Love and emotions were written in a smooth manner. It was a beautiful love story with a satisfying ending. The characters felt real and alive. I would love to read more of her stories.

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The bad project

I found the story of Marianne and Crystal rather captivating. It kept me turning the pages wondering how 'bad' the project was going to be. I guess one can't plan human feelings and this story tries to tell us just that. This is excellent reading.

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The lost souls of Gilfords Falls

A rather interesting drama from the start to finish. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The plot was captivating. Interesting to note how cruel people can get in their quest for wealth. I would like to read more of her works. Keep up the good work, NRF.

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Thee fat singletons

Very fresh and interesting read. I couldn't keep it down for later. I enjoyed the way the story flowed seamlessly. Keep up the good work

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