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Aspiring. Not for anything specifically, just aspiring.

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Double Hat Trick

the only thing i would change is some of the spelling and grammar mistakes. besides that, its amazing. it has romance, it gets freaky😏😏😏 and it even has some rivalry and suspense. the dramatic irony makes it all the better.

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I Couldn't Stop Myself - Bell_C

this story is amazing. it has a great plot, great plot twist, and amazing characters.

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