L. M. Huntwork

Great Concept

For anyone that likes horror, you could definitely get into this one. It has all of the main themes, mystery, gore, sex and a young main character. The grammar does not take away from the story, but there are some edits that should happen throughout for better flow. Aside from that, nothing is too cliche that it would make you feel like it's a story on repeat. It has genuine mystery and another common theme: crows! There is a reason authors and directors use them in their art. The overall thematic changes should be a little more flushed out. The scenes are just a tad bit abrupt and then something else is happening, so it would be good to just add some meat to these story bones throughout.

Also, if you really like the unexpected, I was not ready for the second chapter! The story gets going very quickly which is very nice for anyone ready to delve into this campus horror novel. Hopefully the main character makes it out alive!

Overall, the concept is engaging for horror fans and after some nice edits and work, this could be a great addition to anyone's library of terror.

About an hour later

Oh man. I started this, expecting to only read the first few chapters today and woah. I am blown away by the storyline! This was so fun to read and instantly grabbed me! 11 chapters were just utterly absorbed and I am so excited to read the rest as they come out. This was a very fun read and I really am intrigued by the characters. The plot appears complex and that is super nice to see because sometimes the conflicts are just too simple. I love something that isn't easy to pinpoint. Anyway, major fan right here and I'm really excited to see where this goes and how Saf continues to grow.

Intriguing Concepts

I absolutely adore creative fantasy novels and this one definitely is up there in the creative route. It is not entirely my cup of tea but the concepts were very fun and the grip of the characters was steady. I think there are some grammatical work and syntaxes checks that need read through. Spelling was a tad off at times as well but it was a fun read.