For anyone that likes horror, you could definitely get into this one. It has all of the main themes, mystery, gore, sex and a young main character. The grammar does not take away from the story, but there are some edits that should happen throughout for better flow. Aside from that, nothing is too cliche that it would make you feel like it's a story on repeat. It has genuine mystery and another common theme: crows! There is a reason authors and directors use them in their art. The overall thematic changes should be a little more flushed out. The scenes are just a tad bit abrupt and then something else is happening, so it would be good to just add some meat to these story bones throughout.
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Also, if you really like the unexpected, I was not ready for the second chapter! The story gets going very quickly which is very nice for anyone ready to delve into this campus horror novel. Hopefully the main character makes it out alive!
Overall, the concept is engaging for horror fans and after some nice edits and work, this could be a great addition to anyone's library of terror.