Amazing fantasy world.
I love this story so much. It is a little bit like a cross between Narnia and Alice in Wonderland, but it is completely unique and new. I love the characters and the descriptions are exquisite. You get a good sense of all the different places that the characters travel to, so you can imagine them actually going on their adventure. I also like the intriguing mystery of the Grandmother.
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I think a few bits of the plot could be improved a little- there is no big issue but there is a lot of characters and things happening all at once, so in some places you could maybe add in a little bit more just to clarify what is going on with everyone.
Overall, I think this is a brilliant story and I would definitely recommend to anyone considering reading.