leonkingraph7

Writer, Astronomer and Philosopher

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Unusual

I see that this novel is new. There are only two chapters for now. And to be honest I liked the beginning and the way the Author told the story. I am sure there will be more chapters!

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Interesting

This is quite unique story. It is well written and words create a beautiful flow of sentences.

The characters are extraordinary and that is why it is interesting to read.

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Beautiful

That was really beautiful. Sad, honest, emotional. The Author, Poet, put so many emotions into these poems. I could feel it.
I hope you will find more poems. Because this is a talent.

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Human has so many emotions!

I understand that these are pure emotions, feelings. And human heart can be so confusing. And yet, you wrote your thoughts without the slightest illusion. Here, everything is honest. And that is why scary.

Love can make you smile, and hate. And it also teaches us how to understand our own soul and heart.

Some sentences in this collection of feelings were poetic.

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Interesting

Interesting novel. I read all these chapters really quickly and I am sure there will be more of them.

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I am speechless!

I am mesmerized! I even wrote some poems down and now, these beautiful words are in my notebook. I want to read them again and again. It is so beautiful. I want to memorize all of them. This is truly a masterpiece.
Thank you for sharing with these poems. I hope you will write more of them. Please, write more poems!

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Interesting short story

This was interesting. Really, it was. The story is unique, but I wish there were more chapters. It is clear, that you have a talent. And I hope you will take your talent seriously.
And for now, I will wait for the second part.

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Unique

This novel, even if it has only two chapters, still very intriguing. The first two stories are creepy and they have their own atmosphere. I felt all hopelessness which characters had to face.
The Author is a good storyteller and I am looking forward to read new stories. I hope there will be more of them.

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