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I understand this story just isn't for me, but it's a bit tiresome to read. There's grammar, spelling and punctuation mistakes in every paragraph, information is scattered and mixed up, and the plot isn't really anything new or special. I do enjoy reads like this, and I can tell you may be young and I'm personally proud that you had the courage to post this. Just realize there's a lot to improve on, and a lot more subject matter out there that can prove to be way more intriguing to write about (I promise). You should try stepping out of your comfort level and branching out into other genres, ones you maybe never took an interest in writing. If you read some books in those genres as well, your opinion of them might change.

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