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Nice fee-good read!

I enjoyed reading your story about Jeffery and Lilly Louise. Your writing style conjured nice images in my mind - you can craft a picture with your prose! The only thing I would say is that there was no conflict involved in the short story - injecting some might spice it up. But overall, I really liked it!

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