leyapearl

out in western MA

I'm a librarian from western MA with a son and two cats we hope will someday like each other. Fandoms include Harry Potter, Young Wizards, the Dark is Rising series, Jane Austen, and Peter Wimsey.

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An Interesting Premise

This definitely has promise. Tudor 'what ifs" are popular now, and it would be interesting to see how Anne acts married to the brother of the woman who married her beloved husband. You may want to double check some of your grammar; there are a few places where words are missing, and some of the sentence structure feels a little stilted. Overall, though, I would be curious to see where you take this.

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