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Spelling and grammar could definitely be better, but otherwise well done, it was very fluffy and enjoyable. You should see about a beta reader, or just leave the document for an hour and come back to it with new eyes (this usually helps you find mistakes as the words are not as imprinted on the brain, you read what is there and not what you want or perceive to be there). Thank you for the fluffy read!

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