limelikesjam

Perth

Emily. 19 years old. Against the odds I am both an engineering student and an avid writer and reader. Harry Potter is my life.

Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Interesting

Only one chapter but I like it so far. The summary was interesting, and I can't wait to find out how the marrying, taste-testing, and magic all develop.The prince has an intriguing personality, but I haven't really got much feel for Avi yet apart from being quiet. Looking forward to reading more. :)

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Love this

Really love this story so far. The idea of matching is great because its so shocking, and yet it's so likely to happen sometime in the future. Can't wait to find out what happens with Kalli and how Romy gets along with Henry.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Cool Idea

Really like the idea for this story. Its a cool twist that she experiences how how everyone dies. Looks like ts heading in really interesting direction with the shadow person. However I got confused a lot. I'm not sure if Elena is a real person or a ghost or something else. It was hard to keep track of when Tessa was talking to herself in her mind and when she was talking to others. If you could try and make things more clear, that would be good. Otherwise, looking forward to reading more. :)

Read the story now

No badges received yet

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.