lina

because shit happens

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it's an amazing read!

i am glad that i got at least 5 chapters at once to read otherwise the curiosity could have eaten me alive. the characters are amazing. Nat, Xander, Darren and the supporting characters with their histories still hidden from the readers. the plot of the story is increasingly raging curiosity waves as this is plot from totally different world. the story slowly at first opens itself and catches you off-guard in the middle (for example, i didn't recognize that Nat was girl at first). first chapter of ALPHA though really is fascinating and more cliffhangers are erupted from it. the descriptions, the dialogues, everything is like watching a movie. someone could even make 3-D game from it !
for the critique, i think the chapters were too lengthy but as the quality humor increases in the story the length becomes bearable.
overall, great work and i would love to stick to end of this story. i can barely wait for next chapter.

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it's a great series of poem.

it was great experience to read these poems. the first poem was about the girl who as the time passes learns about perks of the world and starts to hate her hairs. curls which her mother loved. it had many emotions in it. it was like a movie as i said in first comment.
second poem was also amazing considering various struggles and the way of comfort. sometimes, this world has too much to offer and one is supposed to find their "comfort zone" so as to strive and fight with all the problems without letting them sway one away. apparently, this process has it's perks and often tiring. that's why they say "never give up", don't they? it was another amazing piece where you had shared the girl's troubles and her hesitation to let herself out of her comfort zone.
third poem is reality of some people. addictions have a way of controlling some people lives. no matter how many times they told themselves that tomorrow they will give it up but finds themselves doing it again. it's like being stuck in circle. i can relate to it because once i was addicted to mobile and it took me six months or more to come back to senses!
overall, amazing work of art.
it takes extreme potential to write such thoughts down. i am glad you wrote them and shared. i could even relate to one. so, i am looking forward to see more of such work from you.
keep writing!

P.S. : you are amazing! and this in my time writing a review on inkitt. i did my level best!

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