Lina Wahlberg

Incredible

Really great love story with huge character developments for the main characters and a lot of plot twists that will leave you gasping for air. Strongly recommend.

The Lycans of HollowMist

Love. Love. Love.

I love everything about this book. The character growth, the way there isn't any toxic behavior in their relationship (which a lot of books in this genre unfortunately have), the plot, all the characters, the attention to detail, how descriptive the author is of their body language. Everything.

If I had to have one complaint it would be that I wished it was longer but I don't think that the ending as it is was rushed either but rather quite beautiful.

10/10.

Wolf's lullaby

Very unique and mysterious plot full of lovable and interesting characters. I look forward to finding all the answers to my questions!

Incredible

It's a story that hooks you from the start and only gets better the further you read. All the characters are amazing, and the character development that Valencia goes through when her whole life changes is one of the things I love the most about this book. The ending was also very satisfying and well-written, it was exactly what this book needed.

LOVE IT!!!

One of the best wereeolf books I've ever read. I don't reread a lot of books but I've read this one five times now and it's still as good as the first time I read it. The plot is very unique and the author keeps the intrigue high by expanding the world beautifully and leading us deeper and deeper into the story by each chapter. Obligatory mention that the relationship is so cute and it would be impossible not to ship those two. A must read for any werewolf/romance reader.

Great!

supe interesting!!! I wonder what will happen next!t!

Great story!

I really like the plot but there were a lot of unanswered questions at the end, like her golden eyes and what Ella's motivation was. The one that bothered mee the most was probably when he took her out for breakfast and she left a hot pan on the stove without any mention of it afterwards. Overall, I would recommend maybe writing another draft just to get rid of all the inaccuracies and spelling misstakes.

I love how their relationship grew and even their initial meeting was so cute.

Needs a bit of work

I really like the plot but everything feels a bit rushed. Almost like there are two main plots instead of one and I would suggest perhaps making two books where as this one will focus more on the pack war and the next on Rikar? Just a suggestion.

The actual writing is also quite confusing, often there are no indications of whether something is dialouge or description and when quotation marks are actually used it is often like this: Tristen "Hello" RATHER THAN: "Hello," Tristen said. It makes me feel like I'm reading a very discriptive manuscript rather than a novel.
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In conclussion, the story is great but could use a little more structure and perhaps a sequel rather than mashing everything into one book (so that each plot gets its own screentime). The actual writing also needs to be worked on but those things will come in time as you continue writing.
Keep up the great work!