Lindsey Richardson

Alabama, USA Married to US Army Veteran Two Children Christian Fiction Writer

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Great!

I am really liking the plot, how you have it set up to really be a thriller. It is great! I am only on chapter 3, so I am excited to see where the rest goes.

I did notice a few spelling/grammar errors and punctuation errors, but as you stated, this isn't your native language and otherwise, you are doing a very good job.

If I can give a piece of advice, try using the website Grammarly(you can use it for free or pay to use all the features) to help with some grammar and punctuation errors. I promise, it has been a HUGE help for me.

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Great

I think it is great and I'm excited go see more. I do think the layout could be a little different, but everyone has their own writing style. I am enjoying the plot a lot! I think it is going to be awesome!

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