littleauthorgirl

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Love it!

I love your characters! I love Drake is freaking out and Logan is just like "shut up and get to work." I've only read the first part so far, but I'm excited to read the rest. Your plot is very simple, yet it works so well with what you are trying to bring. I also enjoy all of the character's speech and all of the nice details. Good job, and keep writing!

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Woah!

I LOVE THIS STORY! So haunting in a sickly sweet way. Your plot is very neat and tidy, and there are no grammar or spelling mistakes. This is a genuinely scary story and I hope you do well in the contest with this!

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