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Needs a little editing, but overall, not to bad.

Bending the Rules was a good read, but there are a couple things that could be fixed. The whole plot of the nanny and the CEO is a cliche that has been worn out a bit, but the unique twist on the story makes it better. I also wish that the time between the initial meeting and when he started opening up to her was a bit longer. For someone who's not used to the idea of love to be as close to her as he was in the first hours he met her is a bit of a let down. However, the one thing I couldn't really stand was all the errors. I'm a stickler for proofreading and editing, so don't take it too harshly, but it could've been edited a bit.
Overall, the story was pretty great. I love the relationship between Felicity and Molly, and how her just being there helped create a better relationship between father and daughter. Good work!

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