L.L Raine

Enjoyed it!

I love the story, Part-Wolf, Vampire and Witch. I would love for it to be completed and updated. The grammar and puncutation are good and the author made sure the story is easy to follow and easy to keep up.

Love It!

I like the characters especially with Luke, Brian and Evelyn. The plot is pretty good and keeps you curious for the next event to come. I would definitely continue to read.

Keep it coming

I love the story with the protagonist learning that her mate is known for assimilate packs into his fold and giving him an hard time on accepting him as his mate. Good Grammar, Easy to follow. Add more chapters that would be the best thing to do. Nice Job!

Sequel Please

I love the story, even though the grammar can be choppy but it is enjoyable. If we can get a sequel to the story, even better! Maybe years after the events of the first book.

Worth Reading

I love the story and the characters especially when you included witches, demon and magic users. Although, some parts of it are garbled and some of the words were cut out as well some typo errors. Other than that, I would read it again and it sequel.

Love it

I loved the story from beginning to end, from being abused to being alpha on her own two feet. The ending was also satisfying and the punctation and grammar is so good.

Good Story

At first, it was a story of humans vs werewolves and then it was uniting the both races. It had good prose, easy to follow along, punctation & grammar is good with the exception of not having a seperate POV at times but other than that. It is a good story.

Good story, needs more refinement

The story is good and it does have promise. I notice the paragraphs are squished together, some parts of the story felt rushed instead flowing freely. The dialogue can be confusing on who is speaking. Clean on the punctuation, grammar and the flow of the story.

Until then, I'll think it would need some more work.

The story is interesting

The puncuation and the prose of the author is pretty good as well the way of getting you invested in the story for the beginning.

Fix up the paragraphs down to 2-3 and add more chapters. You have a good story on your hands. Nice work!

Good story, just need more chapters

Aside from space out some of the paragraph and adding more chapters into the novel. This definitely will keep me interested in the story.

Good Job! 😀😎

I love the story, Need more chapters

The author's prose as well the pace of the story is very good, I am eager to read more the chapters from the book. But the best part, I love the main character being able to sneak out and learn more about the world around her and learning about how her family keeps her in the dark.

I would definitely continue to read this.

Please add more into the story

It may be short on chapters for right now, It does have potential and the grammar and Punctuation is good as well the story's prose.

I would like to continue reading the story, just add more chapters. Don't forget to remove the whitespace.

The story was good

The story was intense, exciting, unexpected, but it was enjoyable to read from.

Love It

I've enjoyed the story and It was very good and interesting. I want to be able to read it's sequel when it comes out.

Worth Reading

The author has put together a good story and made characters really great to get behind. Especially the main protagnist, not making it easy for the king to claim his queen. Grammar and Prose is good, I will read further.😁

Good Story

I love the story from beginning to end. The part nearly scared me when the protagonist was nearly eaten alive by zombies. Other than, I would recommend this story and read be able to read it again.

Good Story!

I loved the story due to the rich interactions of the characters especially with Aylin and Ezekiel, it also had a lot of twist and turns. I would read it again, too.

Intense! Good Story

What I loved about the story is its rich characters as well them having to face the realities of the zombie Apocalypse as well learning the dangers of it. I would continue to read this and recommended it.

Enjoyed It

The story has the grammar and prose down as the characters coming to life and excitement personalities. I would definitely read it again..

Worth Reading

I definitely love the plot where Jessica joins a gym and meets with her soulmate and the grammar is good where you can follow along with the story. Especially with the two of them, making love with each other. Good Job!

Good story would continue to read

This is a good story where the wife gets a chance to do things on her own and met a man by circusmtances to give her independence. Good Grammer although the story went bit fast for my liking and the prose is good to follow. Nice Job!

Good Start

Hello,

I would to say that I enjoyed the story after reading 4 chapters for so far. The grammar and the prose is good whereas the reader can follow along with the story. I have enjoyed the part where Max and Sarah experienced new things in a new environment, especially where the Doctor shows to be understanding and isn't quick to judge for being Jewish.

There is more to read about the story, so I will continue to read it. It is a good story to read.