Lola Murphy

I believe in sinners than saints

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Has great potential

I really liked the plot flow and also the beautiful and vivid descriptions that the author has blessed us with. It is truly amazing. The character dynamics are also amazing and even though, there were few typos, I think brushing it up would make the book a lot better. Good luck.

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Lola Murphy.

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Deserves a lot!!

Saying that the story is amazing is an understatement. You have done a brilliant job and the plot is so intriguing. Also, the character Mrinal sounds super cool and I'm really excited to know more about her and what happens next. I'm generally not much a fan of the romance genre but this is so different and fresh. However, you need to work on your punctuations a lot!! There should be a comma before closing the quotation comma. There are also small typos here and there. Otherwise, you have a beautiful story going for you. ๐Ÿฅฐ

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Good but requires brushing up

I think this story has a golden potential and could be turned into the next NYT bestselling book if more attention is paid to grammar and writing skills. I also felt that the relationship between the boys progressed a little fast, but that's completely my opinion. Anyway, don't give up yet though. Good luck.

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Lola Murphy.

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Worthy binge-read but needs polishing

This book was worth my binge-read because it had a fresh story for once. Love the female protagonist. However, there were lots of grammatical and punctuation errors. Not to mention the absence of quotations during conversations, which was really confusing to me as I had difficulty in realising which one was narration and which was convo. So, please try to fix that up and the story may come out better. But I love how the plot flows and especially the narration technique. I seriously can't wait for the updates!!!

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Absolutely nothing!

Your story has absolutely nothing! Your plot sounds nice but you have written nothing. Elongating the chapters might be a good start for now!

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One of the best yet one of the most underrated

I hate it when brilliant authors are so underrated and worthless books get the fame. This is so damn unfair. Anyway, coming to the point. This book is so fluently amazing. The plot and the writing is so flawless that it soothes me. The characters are beautifully woven and the scenarios are stunningly descriptive. That being said, the book deserves a hell lot more than what it's getting now. I just hope, it eventually gets the fame and worth it deserves. โค

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Average

I'm not generally a grammar nazi but there were countless mistakes here. However, the plot was sweet and enjoyable. Although, it was difficult to enjoy due to the mistakes. I think editing can fix that. Anyway , it's a nice one.

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Nice

Perfect for a light yet smothering read

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One of the best

This book is one of the best books I've read so far. The author's capability to end each chapter in a cliffhanger is mindblowing. I can't wait for the next update. The characters are well portrayed and not cliche. The protagonist is a smartass and not the typical shy girl. She is basically the sarcasm queen. And every other characters are also good. The plot is too good. I recommend this to everyone. Hell yeah!

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