Lola Murphy

I believe in sinners than saints

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Good but requires brushing up

I think this story has a golden potential and could be turned into the next NYT bestselling book if more attention is paid to grammar and writing skills. I also felt that the relationship between the boys progressed a little fast, but that's completely my opinion. Anyway, don't give up yet though. Good luck.

Regards,
Lola Murphy.

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Absolutely nothing!

Your story has absolutely nothing! Your plot sounds nice but you have written nothing. Elongating the chapters might be a good start for now!

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One of the best yet one of the most underrated

I hate it when brilliant authors are so underrated and worthless books get the fame. This is so damn unfair. Anyway, coming to the point. This book is so fluently amazing. The plot and the writing is so flawless that it soothes me. The characters are beautifully woven and the scenarios are stunningly descriptive. That being said, the book deserves a hell lot more than what it's getting now. I just hope, it eventually gets the fame and worth it deserves. ❤

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Average

I'm not generally a grammar nazi but there were countless mistakes here. However, the plot was sweet and enjoyable. Although, it was difficult to enjoy due to the mistakes. I think editing can fix that. Anyway , it's a nice one.

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Nice

Perfect for a light yet smothering read

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One of the best

This book is one of the best books I've read so far. The author's capability to end each chapter in a cliffhanger is mindblowing. I can't wait for the next update. The characters are well portrayed and not cliche. The protagonist is a smartass and not the typical shy girl. She is basically the sarcasm queen. And every other characters are also good. The plot is too good. I recommend this to everyone. Hell yeah!

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