Venessa Lobo

The Land of Colours

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Amazing

I read the whole book in one go. One the few good stories on Inkitt. Looking forward to read more of your work.

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Looking forward for more

Very intriguing. Need more chapters for a full review.

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Best Short Story

Very intriguing. Scope for grammatical improvements. Refreshing to read original story lines. Will be reading more of your work.

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A must read.

We've seen movies where aliens have invaded earth. Though, it's an up to read a human being an alien on another planet. Worth getting published.

XOXO

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Good story.

I love the story, but the writing at times breaks your link. Like emphasizing on the start of mature scenes or dialogues in italic. If there could be an improvement in this aspect, that would be great!

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The most amazing read on Inkitt

We desperately need a book 2. We all wanna know how it goes down with Sivgard. Oh please! A book 2!

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It's like 2 stories in a great Novel

The grammar needs improving. As well as dialogues and Point of Views being written for the characters. Everything else is great. The story is really enticing. Can't keep waiting to know what happens next!

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Amazing

Liked everything so far. Looking forward to reading more. The chapters have been interesting and worth a read.

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