Lola Ben

A brilliant plot

Apologises for just posting this now. School has been hectic.

So I really love the storyline, it is amazing and one of a kind. I adore the way you portrayed the relationship between Max and Duke as well as the people and things in their environment. But I'll suggest heavy editing. For instance, there are lack of commas at certain points and that makes it a little hard to understand a sentence. Once you've edited, you'll have a greater story.
I wish you the best, Grant!

Now, I'm going to read the rest 🙃

Simple yet engaging

From the first chapter, you can tell that the poems will be relatable. And they were. They were words of advice and encouragement. Some of the poems just make you feel relaxed and that's something good.

love it

The title alone captivated me and I won't lie, the chapters didn't dissapoint. I am yet to finish the book but I found it intriguing already (right from the blurb) I had to write a review. Keep up the nice work.