Loni

Ontario

Hiya Mega introverted Loni here☺☺. ☆ God first🙏 ♤ Aspiring Author ✍️ ♡ Nature enthusiast🌲🌴🌳 ◇ Obsessed with fantasy🧚‍♀️🧚‍♀️ ♧ and werewolves of course 🐺🐺

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AWE-MA-ZING ❤❤❤

I binge read this book in like one go, that's how attention grabbing this book is. I love love love love this book and I promise I'm not crying 😭😭❤

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It will pull you in, trap you and never let you go. The funny thing is, you'll love it❤

I don't even know where to start because I'd be writing a full on epistle😂😂 but I will say this the writing style of the author is one that I covet for myself. The metaphors and imagery weaved in with a dose of reality is one that will surely touch and move you. It's almost like wacthing a movie, that's how freaking awesome it is and the book is only in it's early stages.

I see great potential in this book and don't mind sticking around for more. I recommend this book to any and everyone. Try it! You won't regret it!
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Without hope

I believe this book has a fantastic plot, one that I would love to read as the story develops❤. However, there is still room for improvement especially with regards to the sentence construction, some minor punctuation errors and the pace. I personally felt the pace was a little too fast (especially in the beginning) with little to no character development.

Apart from this I see real potential in this book and with more improvement on the author's part it is sure to be an awesome read. Well done!❤

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Love! Love! Love❤❤❤❤

I don't even know where to begin: Is it the beautiful writing, or the ability to pull you along with the emotionality of the character, or the all encompassing depiction of love (the pain, the happiness and all) or the nice flow and writing style.

This book has it all and I would highly recommend❤❤

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Between two realms

This is one book that will surely grab your attention as the writer takes you on a rollercoaster ride of emotions that are beautifully conveyed by the clever use of writing style. Regardless of the fact that the story has just started, I have no doubt in my mind that it will continue to be an intresting read. Great work!❤

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Intriguing read (literally keeps you at the edge of your seat!!!!)

Right from the beginning the book reels you into it's suspenseful, intriguing world. The secrets, the lies and the past animosity are beautifully conveyed by the author's clever use of writing style, metaphors and other literary devices. The book is yet to be finished but so far I have truely enjoyed it and it also helps that they are little to no spelling or grammatical errors.

If you are one for suspense and thriller, I sincerely recommend this book to you. It is AWE-MAZING❤❤❤

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