lordzupka

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Great short story!

This was a great little piece. It set a mood and scene immediately from the start. There is plenty here to get a full story, yet enough questions to hope that it is expanded on someday.

I look forward to (and hope) that we get to learn more about the world briefly revealed here!

Nice job!

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