Lorena

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Really enjoying it!

I've just read the first chapter and I was caught. The first part of the chapter is so vivid that I felt like I was in the drowning ship with Coraline myself.

The latter felt a bit heavier to read, but I guess it's because it was mostly a scene focused on a conversation and the pace had to be slow.

But overall I really liked the plot and your writing style, I'm definitely reading it all.

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