Lori Beasley-Bradley

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You need an editor

I couldn't get past the first chapter of this story. The grammar mistakes were terrible. This author needs an editor. The first chapter did little to grab me. It did nothing to set up the story and give me a reason to want to read more. I know nothing about the character. Is it male or female? No depth to get me invested.

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Interesting

I write Erotica and this is pretty good. It could use some technical editing, but overall, pretty good.

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