Lori Duncan McNeill

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Entertaining!

So far I really enjoy this story. It's not just about the game, but also about the growth and development of the characters in the real world as well as in the game world. I'm always looking forward for the next chapter to come out. The author's way of describing emotions, actions and reactions are well done, and the characters are easy to relate to as well.

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Good Work

All ready you in the beginning of the chapters you can see the different personalities of the characters. The details given is wonderful, easy to imagine the characters and places. Great work! Glad to see you writing again Darkbringer!

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Enjoyable

So far I really enjoy this story here. The character started out as teenager who was reborn with all his memories. The author did well with the growth of the character also. The culture of the starting point is completely different and the character adjusts to the difference. This story has been fun to read, and keeps you wanting to know what is coming up next!

Really love the way the author writing the detailed emotions of the characters. Also the creative ways of the souls, magic and difference in cultures and such. Great story!!

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