Louise Holliday

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gorgeous

Another beautifully written Spencer/Hotch story.
I loved how the story went. Bringing the early characters back into the story was amazing. I never in a million years knew who the unsub was going to be! Brilliant.
This was so different to what I've read, and I even enjoyed the naughty bits ;)
Thank you again for sharing.

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very good

I'm not normally a Spencer/Aaron shipper, but I'm glad I read this. It's really good, I enjoyed it very much.
I think Spencer is born to be a daddy, so it is always nice to read when he is.
Oh and I love the reference to Dr Who with their little girl.
Thank you for sharing this, I really loved it.

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Beautiful

I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this epic story.
Such a beautifully written heart wrenching story that had me sobbing in places. You go way beyond in the Maeve/Spencer storyline and give us a more detailed explanation of how Spencer must be feeling. I thought him coming back in the next episode so quick and it didn't sit well with me. This one brings him out of his state with his love for JJ and them helping each other is just brilliant.
I liked the alternate Will/JJ story too, so different to what we are used to.
I could ramble on for hours over this, but I will just say, Wow, and I loved it.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

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Finally Spencer fights back

Thank you for this story. I often get a bit mad at the way the team sometimes talk to Spencer. I know they love him but they do pick on him and he just takes it.
I'm so glad you had Spencer sticking up for himself, finally.
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