loveisalie

An imperfect woman who loves life and her family.

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You have the right idea

when reading the story I found there to be many errors. The plot was a little weak, technical difficulties were everywhere, and the sex scene in the first chapter especially lacked depth. However, If given a little TLC, this book could be made into a best seller. Just take the time to reread what you have written, put more detail into your work, and try to portray more emotion. You've got a good start don't give up.

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A really Good Read!

I won't give anything away with this review, as I believe you should read it yourself. I very much enjoyed the story and would recommend the book to anyone looking for a good story. I saw some minor technical difficulties, but nothing that would distract from the story. All in all, with a little polishing this could be a best seller.

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A good read!

A very well written futuristic war story. I saw only minor technical difficulties, but as the author is human I should expect nothing less. It was, for me, a glimpse into the life of a young man, who at times struggled with what he thought was right. Yet, in the end, made the right decision. In closing, I would like to add that I would recommend anyone who hasn't read it to give it a read. You won't be sorry.

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