Luke Peace

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Fantastic

It was well worth my while, and it is well worth yours.

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Too Good For Inkitt

What are you doing here? Go get famous! Your writing style is too intricate, too advanced to be here on Inkitt, and your plot structure is that of a professional novel.
Keep up the good work!

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Worth the Read

You write an engaging story, and your use of religious imagery is creative and fresh. I enjoyed your speculation on the outcome of various religions.
As a Bible Student, I’m still as confident as ever that the second coming will bring about the salvation of all mankind, and every person who ever lived will enjoy immortality in Paradise. However, your bleak vision of the future is fun to read all the same.
Good work, Greg.

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Worth Your While

This a fluent, well-written story, by a talented author. Ash’s character will intrigue you, and you’ll be gripped before the second chapter. Give it a look!

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a solid read

Just read the first chapter. Engaging introduction, can’t wait to finish.

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Catching lightning in a bottle

Just like your previous story, it is well written and engaging. What sets it apart is its darker, less friendly depiction of South Africa than was Some Picnic! This can be thought of as the yang to the others yang— quite different, but just as good.

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Excellent

You’re a gifted writer who knows how to enthrall a reader with your story telling abilities. Your vivid description of the South African region through Ian’s eye makes the reader feel like he is really there. Plus the story was gripping and satisfying. Keep it up!

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Phenomenal!

While I enjoyed many books on this site, this one in particular is the only one I can honestly say is flawless in every respect.

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Exhilarating!

Riveting! The pacing was perfect, and the dialogue had that nice snappy beat that I like to see in my sci-fi stories. This book is going to pick up some fans I can tell!

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Simon Knox

I really liked this story. It’s a real gem on this site.

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Perfect

You have an advanced writing style that sets this work apart from others on this site. Rather than telling the reader what she or he is supposed to be feeling (which regrettably is what many amateurs tend to do), you appeal to the reader’s senses by describing sounds, smells, textures, et cetera in a way that the reader can feel the sensation that you want to convey.
Great work, Hadley!

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