lunasaintlaurent

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Interesting start!

Great start to the story! I like your writing style, it’s very different with the way that you use bullets to represent speech. I’ve never seen that before.

The plot itself is super interesting as well, it reminds me of the James Bond movies! Especially the title.

Keep up the good work, looking forward to what happens next!

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Great start!

I really like your book so far, just right off the bat from the first chapter. The main character is quirky and interesting and I’m intrigued to see why she wanted to move. The length of the chapter is already good, especially for mobile reading. Excited to see what else’s in store! Keep it up 👍

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Amazing!

This is amazing 😍 really looking forward to more short stories in the future in this series!

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