lunasaintlaurent

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Meticulously written & such a unique setting!

I really love the setting of this story (fellow Canadian here ❤️). You’re such a good writer and I really felt like I could imagine the setting as I was reading your descriptions.

The story description is excellent as well, it drew me in right away.

Keep up the good work!! X
Can’t wait for more ❤️

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Interesting start!

Great start to the story! I like your writing style, it’s very different with the way that you use bullets to represent speech. I’ve never seen that before.

The plot itself is super interesting as well, it reminds me of the James Bond movies! Especially the title.

Keep up the good work, looking forward to what happens next!

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Great start!

I really like your book so far, just right off the bat from the first chapter. The main character is quirky and interesting and I’m intrigued to see why she wanted to move. The length of the chapter is already good, especially for mobile reading. Excited to see what else’s in store! Keep it up 👍

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Very intriguing story!

First of all, I want to say you’re doing such a good job writing in English as a second language! I’ve only read a couple chapters so far, but your character is captivating and multidimensional. I like that she is kind of dark and moody, but also has a soft heart.

I’m really rooting for her, and I’m excited to see where the story goes 🙂 keep up the good work!

One thing I would recommend is to have a friend check over the grammar before publishing, but you’re really doing a great job writing in your second language! (I could never do that!) 😂

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This is awesome!! 👏👏

The story is very well written and I love that it involves a wide range of characters who are different, but their lives are intertwined together. I’m definitely interested to see where it goes... 😋
One suggestion would be if you could include a little more about the plot in your story description, I think it would definitely help to attract readers who may be doing a quick scan! Keep up the great work!! Can’t wait to see more ❤️

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Amazing!

This is amazing 😍 really looking forward to more short stories in the future in this series!

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