Luna

I'm 18 and I write books.

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WHEN'S THE NEXT UPDATE

The idea is good. I find Madison so real, I've found my spirit animal lol. Xander on the other hand seems like a brat. A hot brat at least.
Punctuation needs a small fix, nothing to worry about. The descriptions are good, not too long to bore the reader to death. Just enough for us to picture the scenes.
I have one feeling about this. LOVE IT.

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INTENSE

Your writing style is SO GOOD! I couldn't help but reread many lines just because how flawless the structure is. The words choice and descriptions are amazing. You built a great spooky atmosphere.

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