Lundyn Terry-Smith

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Red Heart

I loved this one as well. Jacob Harris, I'm following you. I cant wait to read more of your work.

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Don't Turn Around

Oh My God! This was absoluly amazing. I only wish it was longer. The only thing I hate about a good story is when it ends. This one had me on edge. Its reminds me Ju-On which is number 2 in my top 3 have horror movies. This book has definatly made myntop 5 so far.

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Just Wish It Was Longer.

This was cute, not my favorite. It just wasnt long enough for me. You have all the stuff to make a full book out of this. But over all I did really like it. Pretty original.

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Meh

So I really like the plot. A lot. However, it definatly could have been executed a lot better. This has the potential to be a pretty decent book. I'd like to read a much longer version. One where it talks about how the virus first started, how it spread, how quickly it spread, etc. This felt like it would be perfect for an epilogue of the book, rather then just a short story...

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Intresting

I'm not sure if this was a copy and paste job or not. But there were several "Gramaticle Errors" in several of the stories that usually only happen when someone copys and pastes. Either way. I throughly enjoyed it. My favorite being "Thimble"

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HOLY F++K

OMG!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO GIVE THIS A READ. TWISTS, TURNS, COMPLETLY UNPREDICTABLE. I READ A LOT OF BOOKS, NOVELLAS, SHORT STORIES. BASICALLY I READ A LOT!!!! THIS IS BYFAR THE ABSOLUTE BEST THING I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!!!!

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My Imaginary Friends Don't Like You

I absolutly loved this one as well. I love your imagination. This is really really good. You should totally turn this into a book.

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The Horror on Anglewood Road

I definatly enjoyed this short story. The only constructive criticism I have is that the Author used multiple points of view. First they start out in 3rd Person Point of view, and then towards the end, they go into 1st Person Point Of View. There were also a few grammatical errors, which is ok. I'm not a Grammar Natzi. With that being said, I really enjoyed the story. Well done.

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Yes

I do wish for a story

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I GIVE UP

Ok, so the plot is amazing. I'm obsessed with the idea. But I got to chapter 10 and gave up. The Spelling, puntuation,and grammar are absolutly horrid. I have 1 word of advice!

E D I T !!!!!!!!

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