Lynne

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I found the introduction to the narrative intriguing. The characters have been defined but there is still more I want to know about them and look forward to getting to know them better. The plot line is enticing and leaves me wanting to find out more. There is a line at the end of chapter one which is probably not meant to be there: "Start writing here ... "

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