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I haven't read anything like this before and it resonated with me personally, since if that were our society today then I'd be in that program and am only 5 feet. Just reading her thoughts about how she no longer remembered what mud felt like gave me a strong urge to go outside and push my bare toes into the mud. This was excellently written and brought tears to my eyes as she gave up when she knew she wouldn't make it. The kindness of the clerk was bittersweet but significant in giving her a sense of calm as she reached the final moments of her life. This was just beautifully tragic.

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