Mado Tonero

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Motivation

The story is just a motivational tool for everyone outside there who my be passing through one difficult or the other in life. Life will never get better but one has to continue persevering and keep good hopes for a better tomorrow.

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Mr

The story is a nice one in general, filled with horror images from imagination. I like the way the story keeps one in suspense, making one to read further in order to know what happen next. One of the characters I found interesting was George, referred to as Lunae lumen. I really liked the role he played. One thing I found not interesting is the writing style and grammar. It was more like the ancient style of writing and not with the recent English style of writing.It was a nice work indeed. Courage!!

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