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hmmmm

I liked this, though it dragged on for over 200pages and heaven knows I did not expect the plot twist in the middle. David being Cristiãn. I was wondering when he would show up and didn't know he was there all along.
it looks like there should be a sequel, please let there be a sequel. I know there's a love story btwn Cristiãn and Cassidy, I just know it. please reply and let me know if you have written one and where to find it. if you haven't please, please get on it. over all, it's a captivating read.

HULLO HULLO

Well first of all the story seems rushed. All the characters need development, where did Mitchell's obsession come from and why were Anika's parents in Washington. Even twilight with its twisted love triangle had more depth.
I did LOVE Brady though and wish he ended up with Anika. The protagonist shouldn't end up with the creep cuz that's what Foster was.
I hope there's a sequel though cuz you can't just end it with "Foster come to Washington" like that, why Foster? Why not Brady? What had he done?Why hd she changed her mind after just one birthday spent with him? It all confused me and I need answers please.
Overall it was enjoyable.

Good one

Other than Pauge constantly calling Gabriel "her demon," Gabriel was indeed the best character in this book. His development was sweet and it warmed my heart that he would move heaven and earth for Paige. There was a lot of editing that could have been done but overall, it was enjoyable.

Wonderful

I always like your books.
Well thought out and enjoyable from beginning to the end.
Aside, some avoidable grammatical errors and typos, this is a fantastically written novel.
I look forward as always to more of your work.

Powerful and well thought out!

This book brought out so many kinds of emotions in me. I have never enjoyed a book so much on Inkitt.
Though the writing style was a bit confusing especially with all the POV switches, the whole plot and storyline was captivating enough to keep me glued. I'm proud to say that it took me a little over 48hrs to finish this 8hundred and something paged novel.
To the author, I applaud your enviable imagination and the time it took to writing this. Coming up with names and places that fit the script. Well done!
I look forward to reading more of your work.

Awesome!

It was a good book. The way the guy switched up and begged her though...
I wish real life men were like that, sadly none of those are in existence.
Thank u author, it took me less than 48hrs to finish this. Kudos

Love it

Captivating
Kept me on my toes
Adorable...
Good read
Keep it up

YAASSSSSS!!!

I hope this isn't the end, it can't be. I'd like to see if aunty Rae has recovered from her crazy insecurities and how the dashing James would be like as a Father. The twist that his dad killed his mum was shocking and I don't easily get shocked...

This was a good book. I really hope there's a sequel sometime in the near future.

wow!

the book was enjoyable however, it was extremely dragged. The story could have to told in 800 pages for all anyone cared.

There were far too many mistakes in spelling and the likes which as an English teacher was quite disturbing.

I loved the plot still and since you've made it necessary, I would absolutely love to see what becomes of Celina, Xavier (very intriguing) and Radu, that Princess from Sader as well. It seems like you got tired of writing, I hope this doesn't happen if you choose to do a sequel.

LOVE! LOVE!! LOVE!!!

This really kept me going through all the stress of the last couple of days. I loved the characters, they were quite many but I was able to keep up in the end. I loved the easy dialogue, the fact that two girls were able to pass of as boys for that long still amazes me even after watching "she's the man".
Is there like a sequal or something? because this was good.

This book gave me chills!!

i absolutely loved it! i also can't believe it's your first book. it was captivating and thrilling and the sex... phew!!!
please please please post the other books in the series on here i would love to read it. it would be nice to know what happened to Seraphina's father, her aunt, her friends and of course Sebastian. since Hughes is still alive i would like to know what other mischief he comes up with next.
do not be discouraged this first attempt is amazing and i read it all in one day and feel highly inspired.
like I said, please post the others on inkitt... anticipating your response.

LOVELY

I enjoyed this...
I absolutely love this Alexander character, it's very rare to see a man behave so....

I do hope you write a story on Jake, now he's a character I'd love to see developed.
overall it was exciting, sex scenes well described and not too overboard. Aside from a couple errors here and there I'd totally recommend.
LOVE!

Hmmm

WHAT?! I can't believe you made it end that way! I loved the book up until the last couple of pages. The book dragged on for about a 100pages and then started to pick up when Cain and Cerise got closer,plus I can't believe it took them 338 pages to kiss. So is there like a sequel? What in heavens name will happen to Cain? Uuuurgh!!!!!!