Ashlyn Mair

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Trapped in An Online Game

This book is really interesting. I don’t normally like books like these, but the story just brought me in with the characters. It was very well written and well worth the time. The only thing I would suggest you fix is the grammar. There were a few misspelled words and other words that didn’t make sense in the sentence, but that’s it. I really enjoyed reading it!

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I Hear You

The story was really interesting. I liked the twist where Ryker could hear the people’s songs, whether if it was life or death. I’ve never run into that kind of sorry before, and I’m curious to see how it unfolds.
Overall, it was a great read, and I’d be willing to read the rest of it. Great job!

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