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Everyday Valor

Pretty good novel. Can't seem to get enough of Haley Donohue's writing. This is my ninth police book, 3 more to go with this series. Good job Ms. Donohue.
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Every Day Valor

Fantastic reading as usual. A few mistakes in spelling, but that's okay. Keep up the writing as I continue to read about you midwatch characters.

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Alley Shadows

I am really so glad I have been reading all of Haley Donohue's books. She has done a fantastic job of researching everything police. Brings me back to my days as a police Sarge many years ago. Keep up the the good writing Haley, and I will keep up all the reading!

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Midwatch

Fantastic 1st book of the series. I believe there are 6 books all together in this series. Loved it. If all these books are anything like the 6 books I just read with Sarge and his Ms. Rane...they will all be Outstanding!
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Project Wraith

Fantastic Novel and Plot by Haley Donohue for her 6th story with Sarge and Allison. As a retired Detective myself, I can't say enough regarding Haley's through knowledge of all things Police, Guns, Procedures, etc etc etc. Keep up the great writing HD.

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Unexpected Flame

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Fabulous writer, always entertaining and exciting. Thank you for your imagination and always having me wondering what will the next chapters be like. 5 stars!

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They Can Run

Terrific story...loved all the characters. It is really a shame that in the real world, and not make believe these things are still happening in the world today. Am glad that the perpetrator got his prison sentence. Would love to see more stories in this vein in the future, thaks for writing this compelling story.
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The Silver Lining

What a wonderful story. Nothing is ever what it seems. Very thought provoking. Never suspected the outcome to be so clever! Good writing. Hope you will be doing more stories in the same venue.
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Treatureus secrets

Very good story, very entertaining and did not know til the end who done it!

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Killer on the Train

I really enjoyed this story, but I was disappointed at the ending without knowing the truth if 2 characters did, in fact, get together. There were alot of mistakes in grammar and proofreading. The author needs a better proofreader. Hopefully there will be a sequel to this story. Overall, Good Job!
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Murder in the Pines

I throughly enjoyed this story and all the characters in the story. I hope the author will continue with a follow- up story and/or a series with all the same characters and more police procedures to follow.
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Return to Westover

What a wonderful story about small town America and its people. Very refreshing with a bit of drama, mystery, romance, intrigue and everything else thrown in. Loved it! But saying that, some editing, punctuation and use of words are in order.
Thank you!
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Fettering Shadows

Fantastic Story...lots of intrigue and drama and romance thrown in with all the mystery. Liked it alot. Thanks for writing.
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Betrayal

Fantastc story, lots of drama, mayhem and intrigue. Also romance, and a little bit of everything else. Good writing except for a few mistakes in wording and punctuation. But with a good rewrite that will get better. Thanks!
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The Skeleton Friend

Great story and loved all the characters. A bit of mystery, drama, friendships, cops, and a bit of psychology and romance. Thanks for writing this story.
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The Paperhanger

Interesting story with wonderful characters, but saying that, each time I came to the end of a chapter, I was missing a couple pages, and the next chapter was missing the first few pages of reading. I actually could understand the whole story, but missing parts was not good formatting, reviewing and making sure that your editing people could actually understand and read the whole story. I would like to see a rewrite of this great story thats not missing whole paragraphs and pages.
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Footes Creek

Loved the story and all the drama, mystery, romance and intrigue. Wil definitely read more stories from this author.
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Murder of a Multitude

Wonderful story...still love all the characters and the interaction between them. Looking forward to the next story from this talented author.
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Murder of a Late Night TV Host

Fantastic story...Loved all the many characters and a really good suspenseful and dramatic story. Glad you wrote it. Looking forward to reading other stories with my new favorite detectives.
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The Devil is in the Details

Good story.. lots of clues and I still didn't know who done it til the end. A very good sign of a wonderful writer. I will read more from this author!
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Rachel

Wonderful story...but such a plot and a cliffhanger. I certainly hope there is a sequel to this story...you can't possibly let it end this way!!! Please say there will be more to this story!!!
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His First, His Second

Pretty good story...Was very intrigued with all the characters, all the twists, but a possible good ending with the pregnancy tester.
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In the Victim's Shadow

What a wonderful book, comical, suspenseful, sad, happy, enjoyable, lots of drama, love, mystery, you name it...its all there. Very entertaining, can't wait for more stories to read and enjoy. Thanks for writing this great book!
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Rhapsody from the Grave

Wonderful story...needs more editing for punctuation, grammar, etc. Overall I liked all the interaction with the characters. Never suspected all the twists and turns but was very entertaining.
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Whiskey Devils

Not a bad story, actually was very good. I never knew the outcome till the last few pages; which is a 5 star ending. Good writing and fantastic imagination by a very good author. Look forward to many more tales.
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Hope Park

What a really great story. Too many times gambling on sports is the worst thing to do. This scenario is so often the way that it happens and the nicest people are the only ones hurt including their families. More of same needs telling. Fantastic characters and great story telling. Thanks!
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The Letters

Really nice story...a little too much sex that I really did skim over, but overall a great story. Nice characters, a little mystery, a little suspense, a little humor and everything else rolled into the story. Please write some more stories with the same characters, would love the storyline to continue. Good Work!
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A String of Murder

What a fascinating story. What wonderful characters. Drama, Suspense, Murder, Humor, Love and everything else all rolled into one. I read this story in one sitting. I could not put it down. Thank you so very much for writing it. I want to see more of your writing and hopefully you will get published sooner than later.
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Graves in the Garden

What a great story. Really enjoyed it. The characters were wonderful. Thanks for writing it. Can't wait to read more of your stories.
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Clocks Without Hands

Pretty good story. I liked it immensely. Even though the characters were 16 year old, everything played out very suspensefully. Enjoyable! Hope to read more tales.
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The World Breaks Everyone

Wonderful story...truly loved it...Hopefully I will read it again in Audible or Print, when you publish and are on the Best Seller list. Making my 5 kids read it and they are also loving the story. They also need to know that everyone has secrets and all is not always what seems. Thanks again.
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Murder on Set

What a good story, loved every twist and turn. Immediately loved Portia and all the characters she played. Lots of laughs, suspense, romance and intrigue. My type of story. Looking forward to lots more tales from you. Thanks for writing a great novel.
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Saved

This story was okay...bits of suspense, mystery and romance. That's for writing.
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Under the Weatherley

Very good story...loved the characters and the plot of the story. Romance, drama, mystery and all else. Keep up the good work...but more editing needed for mistakes in punctuation and spelling. Will await other stories.
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Crossfire

Very compelling story...throughly enjoyed reading. I could not figure out how the culprit was going to do away with Mr. Snow until almost the end. I love a good detective story. Very well done...look forward to more from you.
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Forgotten Rage

This is truly the best story I have read in a long time. Reading it non stop was a first for me. And I love Detective stories. The characters were delightful, there was a nice mix of humor, mystery and love. Melody...you should be a published author up there with the likes of James Patterson and his peers. Thanks and keep up the good work. Will be awaiting other stories.
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Three Graves

Fantastic story! Loved every moment of it. Did love the ending...and what a bunch of laughable characters. Keep of the Fantastic writing!
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Silent Justice

Very good story...In fact, so good I can't help but wonder if this is happening somewhere in the USA or the world. Very believable. Nice touch with intrigue and romance thrown in. Believable characters, but need a little editing in the grammar and punctuation department. Good Writing, Would like another story with Robert as the main character.

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The Tattered Thread

This was a delightful story. The characters were entertaining and I liked the detective staying in the background. I really felt sorry for the son and also liked Elaine and am glad she entertained the idea of being a governess. Very suspenseful waiting until the last couple of chapters to find out who the killer was. Not who I suspected. Good Job B.A. Braxton. Hopefully more writing is in the works.
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Pigeon Blood

Avery intriguing story. It was fun and suspenseful at the same time. I kind of liked that Detective Rein stayed in the background. I really learned alot about rubies too. And quite a cast of characters. Keep up the good work B.A. Baxton. I hope to enjoy reading The Tattered Thread next.
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The Apprentice Detective

Fantastic story...very different, but I loved it. Please write some more tales of these detectives and apprentice detectives. Very intriguing plot and outcome of the story. Good Work.
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The Thousand Words

Great story telling...love the plot and the characters in the story. A little editing may be needed due to some punctuation problems, aside from that, good writing Todd Leader. Looking forward to more tales of Alex and his cameras and blog. keep up the good work!
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Evil Cemetery Monster

Okay story...really need a proofreader and maybe a speller and punctuation expert. Plot okay, too many suspects and not enough explanations from characters in the story. Other than t...too long and drawn out. Sorry, its not my kind of story. Good Luck Mr. Mareys

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Arrival

It really was a very intriguing story and I throughly enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it Ms. Payne. Loved the characters and the cohorts. Hopefully there will be a sequel to this story and more will be known about Mark and Cassie. And what happens to Julie.
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Blue Jazz

Again...fantastic story of LAPD and Montego and pals. Thanks Jess Waid.
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Shades of Blue

As usual, Jess Waid has done everything correct and given us a terrific story of the LAPD. Alot of history is a good thing and proper police terminology is a must. Just love all your stories Jess. Montego's buddies are also well documented. I find absolutely nothing wrong with your writing Jess Waid. I look forward to more stories about Mike Montego. Good work!
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The Purple Hand

As always, Jess Waid has done a terrific job of writing the exploits of Tonto... To me Jess is on a par with James Patterson and his wonderful books about Alex Cross. Hopefully In the near future the whole world will be reading about Mike Montego and his climb to homicide detective. Thank you Jess and keep up your great writing.
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Circle of Yellow

What a wonderful continuing story about Mike and Julie and all of the other characters. Continue what you are doing Jess Waid. You are a wonderful writer and hopefully soon a published Number 1 author in the country.
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Kona Gold

I am so amazed how much thought and investigating has gone in to this story. I have lived in Hawaii, born and bred, since 1968. I am so enjoying reading about all the characters in this story that I have known in the past. All of the Hawaiian places mentioned that I have gone to. It means so much to me that as an author you have taken the time to make sure that all the reading is based on genuine Hawaiian customs and traditions. I married one of the surfers you mentioned. I have spread ashes in the ocean and regularly eat at the Canoe Club. Brings back so many memories as Rev Arakawa was an integral part of my husband's family. You have done an outstanding job of writing about Hawaii. Thank you for the wonderful story. I know that all your other stories will be just as good. Good Luck in your writing future.
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459-Framed in Red

OMGosh...what a wonderful and exciting story. I can't begin to tell you how much I loved this tale of detectives and mayhem. Characters engaging, punctuation amazing and excellent writing. Wish you were one of the Top Authors on the planet Jess Ward!!! Can't wait to read more stories from you Jess!
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The Button Man

Really liked this story. I did not know who was the killer until the last chapter. Very good plot, nice characters, no punctuation problems. I was very entertained from beginning to end. Good Work Susan Brassfield Cogan. Look forward to more tales from you.
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Red Bellied Brown

Really, really like this story...the best I have read in a while Mr. Sam. You do need to edit for grammar and punctuation, but other than that...I love the characters and the plot. Am almost to the end of the story, and still don't know what going to happen and who done it. That is the best criteria for a story, to keep them guessing. Good work Mr. Sam.
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Written in Blood

Did enjoy the story, but from the beginning I had a hard time figuring out who was who. Too many characters and couldn't decide where this story was taking place, but finally did. I guess Steve was a president of the USA. Very weird story. But all in all I stuck it out.
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The Darkness Behind the Face

As I said before I loved all the characters, especially Archer. What a great story. Hoping to see more stories like this one. Thanks Kate usernames. Until later, very good writing!
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Finding Jack

Fantastic story..exceptional writer. Loved the plot, the people, etc. You should be published and on a best seller list. Can't wait to read another great story. Good job Mr. Tens
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A Sense of Discovery

A very nice interesting and great mystery. Lots of suspense. Read the whole story in 2 days. Fantastic Mr. Perks...looking forward to the next story!
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Last Name Unknown

I just loved this whole story and the mysterious Kade and Ghost, my favorites. The writing was superb as so little punctuation errors. Can't wait to read another book by Mr. Duffy. Well done!!!

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Blue Line Detective

Fantastuc Story Mr. Duffy. I really liked all of the police conversations and procedures. Hopefully you have a proofreader for your other books. Overall, good work and will look forward to reading more.
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Paranoid

Good Story...when did they ever learn anything in school? But they should have told Grace's father early on. Okay story...but too drawn out.
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Drawn to Death

Story was just okay with me; just too much sex in it...just not my thing
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Target Acquired

Really a very nice story...good to see the good side of law enforcement. Immensely liked the ending. Good job micaelodian. NM Keep the stories coming.

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Dangerous Liasons

It was a clever mystery story...I never suspected the clairvoyance to play a part. GOOD job Melissa bunnell.

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Crisis of Identity

Great Story Mr. G. I am enjoying immensely! I still can't figure out the outcome. Is Kade the missing Jaden or isn't he? I think again will be up all night until the end of the story. Fantastic work Mr. G.
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What Goes Around Comes Around

The best story yet my Mr. G. All of his books need to be published and on The Best Seller List in USA, Canada, Great Britain and every other Country in the World. He is totally as best or better than my favorite author James Patterson. Well done Mr. G.
I have 3 more books by Mr. G. to read. Crisis of Identity, A Dish Best Served Cold and Judge, Jury, Executioner. Can't wait!!!
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This Little Piggy

Just as I knew, Mr. G's writing is exceptional. I am very intrigued with all of his books. I just have to read each one in one sitting he is so good. This Little Piggy is very mysterious, as I cannot fathom how it will turn out. Keep up the best writing I have the pleasure of reading.
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Harsh Consequences

As Always, Mr. G is right on in his story telling. Such a great story. I am always hooked until the end, read all books right thru the end. Can't wait till my next book from Mr. G.
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The Cryptic Killer

This is by far the absolute best mystery story I have read in a long time. Steve Gee is an outstanding writer. I could not put this read down once I started reading and fell asleep about 3am without finishing. Could not wait to try and finish it when I woke, am almost there. Still have no clue who the unsub is. Keep up the good work Mr. Gee! Will read the Coastal Killings next.
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The Angel's Christmas

I really loved the outcome of each of these stories...What a wonderful writer you are. Will be reading more of your books.
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The fighter

Really like the story...made me cry a couple of times!
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Split

I liked the story but not so much the ending.

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The coven mystery book 2

Good story want to read other books by this author
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A coven Cafe mystery

Loved it all...can't wait to read more from this author.
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