makapueo65

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Coming Home To a Place I've Never Been

What a wonderful read...and a happy ending, along with some fun mysteries. Hopefully there will be more stories from pgibbs227 in the future!
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Treatureus secrets

Very good story, very entertaining and did not know til the end who done it!

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The Tattered Thread

This was a delightful story. The characters were entertaining and I liked the detective staying in the background. I really felt sorry for the son and also liked Elaine and am glad she entertained the idea of being a governess. Very suspenseful waiting until the last couple of chapters to find out who the killer was. Not who I suspected. Good Job B.A. Braxton. Hopefully more writing is in the works.
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Pigeon Blood

Avery intriguing story. It was fun and suspenseful at the same time. I kind of liked that Detective Rein stayed in the background. I really learned alot about rubies too. And quite a cast of characters. Keep up the good work B.A. Baxton. I hope to enjoy reading The Tattered Thread next.
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The Apprentice Detective

Fantastic story...very different, but I loved it. Please write some more tales of these detectives and apprentice detectives. Very intriguing plot and outcome of the story. Good Work.
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The Thousand Words

Great story telling...love the plot and the characters in the story. A little editing may be needed due to some punctuation problems, aside from that, good writing Todd Leader. Looking forward to more tales of Alex and his cameras and blog. keep up the good work!
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Evil Cemetery Monster

Okay story...really need a proofreader and maybe a speller and punctuation expert. Plot okay, too many suspects and not enough explanations from characters in the story. Other than t...too long and drawn out. Sorry, its not my kind of story. Good Luck Mr. Mareys

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Arrival

It really was a very intriguing story and I throughly enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it Ms. Payne. Loved the characters and the cohorts. Hopefully there will be a sequel to this story and more will be known about Mark and Cassie. And what happens to Julie.
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Blue Jazz

Again...fantastic story of LAPD and Montego and pals. Thanks Jess Waid.
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Shades of Blue

As usual, Jess Waid has done everything correct and given us a terrific story of the LAPD. Alot of history is a good thing and proper police terminology is a must. Just love all your stories Jess. Montego's buddies are also well documented. I find absolutely nothing wrong with your writing Jess Waid. I look forward to more stories about Mike Montego. Good work!
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The Purple Hand

As always, Jess Waid has done a terrific job of writing the exploits of Tonto... To me Jess is on a par with James Patterson and his wonderful books about Alex Cross. Hopefully In the near future the whole world will be reading about Mike Montego and his climb to homicide detective. Thank you Jess and keep up your great writing.
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Circle of Yellow

What a wonderful continuing story about Mike and Julie and all of the other characters. Continue what you are doing Jess Waid. You are a wonderful writer and hopefully soon a published Number 1 author in the country.
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Kona Gold

I am so amazed how much thought and investigating has gone in to this story. I have lived in Hawaii, born and bred, since 1968. I am so enjoying reading about all the characters in this story that I have known in the past. All of the Hawaiian places mentioned that I have gone to. It means so much to me that as an author you have taken the time to make sure that all the reading is based on genuine Hawaiian customs and traditions. I married one of the surfers you mentioned. I have spread ashes in the ocean and regularly eat at the Canoe Club. Brings back so many memories as Rev Arakawa was an integral part of my husband's family. You have done an outstanding job of writing about Hawaii. Thank you for the wonderful story. I know that all your other stories will be just as good. Good Luck in your writing future.
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459-Framed in Red

OMGosh...what a wonderful and exciting story. I can't begin to tell you how much I loved this tale of detectives and mayhem. Characters engaging, punctuation amazing and excellent writing. Wish you were one of the Top Authors on the planet Jess Ward!!! Can't wait to read more stories from you Jess!
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The Button Man

Really liked this story. I did not know who was the killer until the last chapter. Very good plot, nice characters, no punctuation problems. I was very entertained from beginning to end. Good Work Susan Brassfield Cogan. Look forward to more tales from you.
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Red Bellied Brown

Really, really like this story...the best I have read in a while Mr. Sam. You do need to edit for grammar and punctuation, but other than that...I love the characters and the plot. Am almost to the end of the story, and still don't know what going to happen and who done it. That is the best criteria for a story, to keep them guessing. Good work Mr. Sam.
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Written in Blood

Did enjoy the story, but from the beginning I had a hard time figuring out who was who. Too many characters and couldn't decide where this story was taking place, but finally did. I guess Steve was a president of the USA. Very weird story. But all in all I stuck it out.
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The Darkness Behind the Face

As I said before I loved all the characters, especially Archer. What a great story. Hoping to see more stories like this one. Thanks Kate usernames. Until later, very good writing!
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Finding Jack

Fantastic story..exceptional writer. Loved the plot, the people, etc. You should be published and on a best seller list. Can't wait to read another great story. Good job Mr. Tens
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A Sense of Discovery

A very nice interesting and great mystery. Lots of suspense. Read the whole story in 2 days. Fantastic Mr. Perks...looking forward to the next story!
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Last Name Unknown

I just loved this whole story and the mysterious Kade and Ghost, my favorites. The writing was superb as so little punctuation errors. Can't wait to read another book by Mr. Duffy. Well done!!!

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Blue Line Detective

Fantastuc Story Mr. Duffy. I really liked all of the police conversations and procedures. Hopefully you have a proofreader for your other books. Overall, good work and will look forward to reading more.
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The One That Came Back

Okay story, kind of weird to me. I really did not get the ending. Kind of confusing too. But well written.
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Paranoid

Good Story...when did they ever learn anything in school? But they should have told Grace's father early on. Okay story...but too drawn out.
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Drawn to Death

Story was just okay with me; just too much sex in it...just not my thing
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One and the Same

It was an okay story, just a little confusing regarding the 2 twin girls at the end of the story. Liked it.
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Target Acquired

Really a very nice story...good to see the good side of law enforcement. Immensely liked the ending. Good job micaelodian. NM Keep the stories coming.

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Dangerous Liasons

It was a clever mystery story...I never suspected the clairvoyance to play a part. GOOD job Melissa bunnell.

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Crisis of Identity

Great Story Mr. G. I am enjoying immensely! I still can't figure out the outcome. Is Kade the missing Jaden or isn't he? I think again will be up all night until the end of the story. Fantastic work Mr. G.
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Judge, Jury, Executioner

Okay Mr. G...not as exciting as your other 8 books I read. I already think I know who done it...Trent. I will have to wait until the conclusion to decide if I really like the story about the newbie cop.
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A Dish Best Served Cold

Oh My, another book by Mr. G. that I could not put down until finished. You did it again Mr. G. Now I only have 2 more reads from Mr G. Crisis of Identity and Judge, Jury, Executioner. What's going to happen when I am finished reading the final 2 books Mr. G.? I sincerely hope you are writing several new reads. Fantastic writing Mr. Steve Gee.
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What Goes Around Comes Around

The best story yet my Mr. G. All of his books need to be published and on The Best Seller List in USA, Canada, Great Britain and every other Country in the World. He is totally as best or better than my favorite author James Patterson. Well done Mr. G.
I have 3 more books by Mr. G. to read. Crisis of Identity, A Dish Best Served Cold and Judge, Jury, Executioner. Can't wait!!!
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This Little Piggy

Just as I knew, Mr. G's writing is exceptional. I am very intrigued with all of his books. I just have to read each one in one sitting he is so good. This Little Piggy is very mysterious, as I cannot fathom how it will turn out. Keep up the best writing I have the pleasure of reading.
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The Mentor

Loving this story by Mr. G. can't get enough of his novels. Gets better with each book I read.
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Harsh Consequences

As Always, Mr. G is right on in his story telling. Such a great story. I am always hooked until the end, read all books right thru the end. Can't wait till my next book from Mr. G.
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Emily's List

Love this 2nd read of a book by Mr. Gee. He is very eloquent in his story telling. I will definitely read all his books! Thanks for never being boring in your writing Mr Gee.
I can't seem to put my reading til I get to the end of the story. Well done!!!
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The coastal killings

Wonderful ending...
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The Cryptic Killer

This is by far the absolute best mystery story I have read in a long time. Steve Gee is an outstanding writer. I could not put this read down once I started reading and fell asleep about 3am without finishing. Could not wait to try and finish it when I woke, am almost there. Still have no clue who the unsub is. Keep up the good work Mr. Gee! Will read the Coastal Killings next.
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The Angel's Christmas

I really loved the outcome of each of these stories...What a wonderful writer you are. Will be reading more of your books.
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Double Standards

What a fantastic story...I really thought the unsub was Otus for awhile.
But I really liked how it turned out!!! Great Writing!!!🙂🙂🙂

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The fighter

Really like the story...made me cry a couple of times!
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Split

I liked the story but not so much the ending.

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The coven mystery book 2

Good story want to read other books by this author
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A coven Cafe mystery

Loved it all...can't wait to read more from this author.
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