Malak Bat.

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The silent witches

I love the fact that you wrote it like a regular book with all acknowledgments. Anyways I love the plot twist and I thought that it was an entertaining book to read. It was really good and I would recommend it to everyone. Hope you keep writing.

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Good so far

I thought that it was really great even though I am not a fan of horror. I hope you keep writing because you are doing great so far. Can’t wait for an update.

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Poetry

I am not a big fan of poetry but I have to say, that this was very good! The spelling was great and I would definitely recommend it to everyone! I love the way you displayed emotion and told a story at the same time! It was also all pretty accurate too!! I hope u can check out one of my books and give me feedback as well! Even tho they aren't poetry!😄❤️

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Alpha

It was great your description was just right. The grammar was great though I would suggest going back and doing some editing! I loved how there was so many mate stories! I didn’t like the fact that Emilia wasn’t included that much though!

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Not good Ending

I loved your book, but that ending. Oh, that ending was just unfair. In fact, it should be illegal how dare you author leave me on a cliff hanger, ignoring the love triangle. Not showing us the next step in the project, not telling us if they end up together, and not telling tori and Danny's story and what about carter. Also, you might want to go back and edit. You left so many questions unanswered and story unfinished. I feel like the story could have been so much better but lost potential because it was not complete and it didn’t have a sequel. Can you please make it a series I need to know what happens

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Best book ever

I love your book. But the first time really???!!! It felt as if you were so experienced on the topic. I loved everything about your book, but I still feel sad that her curse wasn’t removed. Would have loved to see more fighting and action. But I still thought that it was amazing and to be honest there is nothing bad I can say about it. I would say try to check some of the chapters for mistyped words even though there was barely any. I would really love it if you could try reading my book called destiny undecided. I could always use some criticism from you

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Dancing flames

I thought that it was great I did get confused at some points though. I like the way you write your dialogue and how you describe the character's feelings. It was interesting to read and really funny at some points. I like how you write it in a way, where it makes you feel like you are actually there, experiencing things with the characters. Also, I don’t know if you have, but can you try reading my book called Destiny Undecided and give me some feedback.

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Great book

I loved all the characters and how detailed you are when it comes to emotions and places. The writing style was really good and it always made you want to come back for more. It was amazing and I can’t wait until you finish it. You have an amazing talent, don’t let it go. I wish you the best.

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Good

I thought that the book was amazing it was so good and I would recommend it to everyone. You have good talent, never stop writing. It was really entertaining and interesting overall. Can’t wait to see your next work.🥰

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Amazing

I thought that the story was very well written. It was really good I enjoyed everything about it. I liked most of the characters, but I couldn’t stand her mom. You have talent, and I think you should write more often. The grammar was actually really good and so was the spelling. I would recommend it to everyone. Also amazing summary!😁😁😁

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Very good start

I thought that your story was great. It had a lot of action and everything described clearly and at the beginning, I think you should have done it where he was griefing for a little bit and then started getting angry because it would have added a better more relatable thing. But overall I thought that you did an amazing job. Can’t wait for a new update. 😁

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Really good

I love your book. I want more now! It is a shame that you ended it here. I also really wished that the other chapters would have been longer. I wanted more dialogue and action from this book, and I guess that we were gonna get that later. Could you at least tell why the f is her mom married to this goddamn awful man? 😭😭Don’t stop writing because you have a lot of talent. Also if you haven't already can you please check out my book destiny Undecided. Thank you! 😄

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Great so far.

I like your book, a lot and can not wait for more. What I would say is try to make the chapters longer because that way it becomes more intriguing. I would have loved if there was more description of emotions and on how they look. Overall I would definitely read this again and I can not wait until you finish it. Keep up the great work. Also if you haven't already would you please review my book. Thank you😄

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Nature calls Autumn.

I really liked the book and I thought that it was well written. I can't wait for more. I would recommend it to all of my friends. I thought that the storyline was really great and a was the plot, don't stop writing because you are very talented.😁❤️

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Very good

This book was really good. The description was really accurate and very helpful in letting others imagine clearly what is going on. Also, the emotions of the characters were described in a very clear and enlightening way. The foreshadowing and cliff hanger was really good. I thoroughly enjoyed reading and can not wait for more. Also, love the storyline and dialogue.

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Girls can't play football

I really loved your story. Even though there were a lot of mistakes in grammar, and I really liked the plot twist because I thought it was going to be about proving that girls can play football, but it turned out to be way more than that. Keep up the good work and updates really soon, please. Also, if anybody is looking for fantasy, adventure, and battle, then please consider reading my book " Iris and the kingdom of seranadan."

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Good

I thought the book was great but had a lot of grammar mistakes in there. I liked all of your characters. And please 🙏 post more. I also can't wait to see the ending.

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Fayre

I dislike her father and like fayre.
I don't know who to recommend this to.
I gave this review because I thought this book was really good and the writing style, but what I would say is trying to edit more because there are some mistakes. Overall, I really liked reading your book. It is really great.

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