Simran Kaur

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I am in love

The story is amazing, I actually went ahead and re read it because of the part 2 which is just as good. It is well written and characters are easy to fall in love and root for. Even the ones you don't like are wrll writtrn, Ivy clearly has the ability to play with our emotions in a good way! Can not wait to read more of your work!

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Orc of mine

Its one of the best books on the site. Well written with a driving plot. I eagerly wait for updates. It has charm and the smut is also excellent. Definately worth the read!

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Action packed delicacy

I do not read much action, but Grant Ayers has a way with words, I am mostly on the edge because I can not stop reading it, each chapter has its own set of cliffhangers, you would not realise how much you have read till you are in too deep, its hard to put down. Its well put, witty and funny at parts. The use of onomatopoeia throughout the book is so well done. I still have some chapters to go but I can say it with certainity now that this book is not what you think it will be when you hear "a guy ate a table". I even learnt a few things, like how to write good action sequences. Characters are well written, the deacriptions take you to the world imagined,overall a very action packed delicacy. I might have more to say when I finish it, but really good work.

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Its a good book

The characters are good, its well written, i do wanna provide some constructive criticism: sometimes the abrupt change in the pov's are bothersome and I would like if there was a little more description of the actions rather then just telling what is happening, for isntance saying, I felt angry, show us that the character is angry, like he clenched his jaw in annoyance or something of that sort, in your own style, and the Pov's should have more space in between and shouldnt start abruptly. Some editing is also required but other than that the story is good, you do wanna know more and it keeps you hooked, good writting style, i look forward to book 2😁

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Interesting concept, good read

I am genuonely invested in the characters, you do need to edit it a little with some typos but otherwise great, cant wait for more!

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It's very cute

Its well written, the characters have the spark and the chemistry, it keeps you hooked with its story line and its actually pretty good. Can't wait for more!

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Couldnt stop reading

Its a good book, egaging, a little fucked up but thats what I love about it.

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Good but needs some editing

Its a good book, good plot, you fall in love with Teddyand all the other characters. It does need a little editing, but otherwise a very well written book.

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Pretty well written

Very well written, keeps you invested. The plot seems intruiging and the erotic parts are 🥰

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Interesting

Its captivating and well written. Cant wait for more

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Amazing

I can bot stop reading it, good plot, filled with suspense and the slow burn is just so well shown

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