Manika

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Pretty good.

The overall plot is definitely interesting. Not just two but three dimensions are put together, humans, angels and demons. But I really feel as the characters are not developed the way they are to. You can also work on writing pattern a little.

But trust me, when the characters will grow more the into story, they will help it stand out. And please do update fast I am waiting😉
good luck❤

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Unique

The story's plot was what I found most impressive. The way each character was defined and developed was fantastic. A werewolf and a magic princess together was probably a first one I have read. The story was good, but (which always pops out of nowhere) you could do better if you could work on your writing pattern. You can shorten the paragraphs or use appropriate punctuation in appropriate place. Good luck ❤

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