First, please don't stop writing. This is a good start and I know if you keep going, it will be fabulous.
Read the story now
The story line is unique. I like the pace you tell the story. It gives the reader time to understand the plot and imagine what is going on. Good use of your descriptive terms. It heightens the tone and creates an environment instead of just reading words of a story.
I am ready for more chapters. I am going to add you on my list!
I read in the other comments that English isn't your first language. I am so impressed with what I see. There are areas where you change tense in the sentence. The first part would be in past tense using words like "had" "was" "went" and in the same sentence the tense switches to active. English is a hard language to learn especially since verbs in English are completely different. I would suggest when you are done go to fiverr.com or another site and have them edit your book. This will allow you to publish your works without worry of this area.
The more you write, the better you will get at this so DON'T STOP WRITING!!!
One more thing. I love the cover design!