Patrick B Vince

aurora, CO

Poetry writer since his teens, Patrick has published several books of collected pieces focusing around adult themes and morbidity.

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saw read you wrote

a real interesting story. Covered a background and character introduction. I found myself reading the words you wrote and how I speak. Mother and Father = Parents. I also had a sense of daja vue where there was a repetition within chapter one. Somewhat different wording saying what had been said. Good start, suggest rereading out loud, write what you speak..

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