Holds my attention well
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the book. The author did a good job keeping the reader's attention with a continuous string of new adventures that they went through. I tend to skim read books to get to the interesting parts, but I didn't need to with this one. I enjoyed it all.
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I also noticed the many references to the Christian faith, which I really appreciated. It helped me feel safe reading the book, that it wouldn't go down the wrong path.
Though there are some basic grammar issues, they are obviously just typos. You can easily read through them. The author actually seems to know their grammar pretty well.