MLTALCANTARA

Mythical Realm

From 🇵🇭A mother. Outspoken. I love to read and write according to my reference, obsessed with domineering /possessive ML and gutsy FL.

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Love it

I am not a perfect writer, and I am still trying to learn ways to improve my writing skills.
So far, the book is eye-catching.
I am into it and would love to read it until the end of the story. There's some grammar error that can be corrected and I too have this minor problem. Keep up the good work good luck dear xxx.

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Good One

I must say as a reader this book is really interesting.Overall it's smooth sailing, and I like how detailed it is. There's some part on some chapters that I don't know if it the twin or the sister or Brian.
My critique: Please write using ” and ” in a dialogue that's all.
My review is always as a reader never did I reviewed as a writer because I believe readers are the one who will give you the most honest critique and by following some good suggestion you will learn and come up with a better story next time you write. Overall
I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your talent🙏

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Gideon

Not much I could say as I have read almost all of your book Nik, I am one of your fans from the beginning until now. Your story captivated the heart of many people including me.
Grammar, plot, punctuation. Is that even matter you write with passion and the people can emerged themselves to your story what else others can say? For me all of your work is outstanding. I love it keep safe you and your whole family Nik.
❤️❤️❤️

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Trapping Quincy

Not much I could say as I have read almost all of your book Nik, I am one of your fans from the beginning until now. Your story captivated the heart of many people including me.
Grammar, plot, punctuation. Is that even matter you write with passion and the people can emerged themselves to your story what else others can say? For me all of your work is outstanding. I love it keep safe you and your whole family Nik.
❤️❤️❤️

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Well Written A Marvelous Book

Not much I could say as I have read almost all of your book Nik, I am one of your fans from the beginning until now. Your story captivated the heart of many people including me.
Grammar, plot, punctuation. Is that even matter you write with passion and the people can emerged themselves to your story what else others can say? For me all of your work is outstanding. I love it keep safe you and your whole family Nik.
❤️❤️❤️

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Truly inspiring!

In every sentence I read I am drown to the extent I can Imagine the pain. The sorrow and to be able to write a poem one should be really good. Keep it up I love it. The way of writing to the way of conveying the emotion in every words it is truly a master piece in the making.

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Superb Story, A masterpiece in the making!

Firstly It’s my first time reading a suspense thriller book.
I love how slowly things are unfolding.
The author writing style is new to me and I love every bits of the chapter.
Atticus,Lele and Joshua characters is very defined. Hunter is a good character for a romance with Lele in this suspense story. Sorry I don’t really don’t know how to describe it after reading it. Over all I am rating it full 5 star! A masterpiece in the making.
Looking forward for more of your creations.

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Looking forward

Easy to read love the plot and so far it's almost prefect I would love to read more.
It's very different from what I've read before and I like unique story line.
One thing I just want to say is that I like it if the chapter is per one pov there is also some part that I thought it's a thirds person then it change to one person. So far I am not a difficult person to criticize other works because I too is not perfect and still trying to learn more.
Over all thumbs up. Good luck my dear🙏

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