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Born of The Flames

It's a very interesting novel that I suggest to everyone loves this kind of reading. Although out of known time (year 208 from what?) and space (where are Kappland and Reikland?), the characters are very realistic. The main protagonists, Ryden the Smith and Melca the Baker, at the beginning, are two boys, who suddenly have lost everything, their village and the dearest ones. During their journey from Cadmir to Rector, from childhood to manhood, both of them have the other to protect and trust. What puts them together is not only friendship but their common purpose: to avenge their world's end and to try stopping a war that could destroy this world completely. Here the shadow - man from prologue ( who, at the beginning, I thought and I'm worried he was Ryden) enters in scene. Will they succeed on that? We can't know, it needs a sequel that shows who Allisad really is:the friend- protector or the maker of their adversities? Only a criticism: according to me, there are too many and long descriptions about duels and archery's tryouts.

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Annaldra

"Annaldra" had been my first novel on Inkitt. When I saw the image of a standing stones' circle, I thought it was a story similar to Outlander by Gabaldon, but I was wrong, except for the travel through the time. "Annaldra" is a love's story, interesting and involving, without wars or historical references. Language and style are easy to read. But the end disappointed me, because it is incomplete unless the author thought about a second part ( What will happen during the third night?). Rather apocalyptic is the ecological final perspective.

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