Mariagoretti

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Lovely plot

I am writing this review half way through the book. I love the plot in general. I have never read a fantasy book, this was my first and I liked it. I was sad with the death of Mr Jefferson because starting the book I thought he was going to be one of the main focus. The book is literally more that just a mentally unstable patient. I like the way Tara is portrayed in general. She's the ideal strong hearted female protagonist. I loved each surprises I was welcomed with in each chapter.

I didn't know English wasn't your first language but now I can understand all the grammatical errors, maybe you could ask someone to proof read and edit it for you. 😊

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