Marianne Alyssa Velasco

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Heart wrenchingly Beautiful

I love how you evoke emotion into your writing. You showed hope, love and faith amidst the tragic plot. My heart was breaking along with Emily's; but, peaceful and content, that's how I feel at the end. ♥️ Great job.!

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Heartfelt and Spiritual

I love how the story pulls you in and grips your heart as it took its course. I love the plot, the twists. I like the depth of characters' spirituality and beliefs.

There are some technical errors though, especially words left out (e.g. Names of places or people)

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Beautiful Storyline! Heartwarming and inspiring. ❤️

I love the storyline, and how it was delivered. However, there were some typo errors like name swaps and wrong word used (e.g "pressed changers" instead of 'charges'). It didn't threw me off the story though. It has a very good message and plot, that a few typos, which can easily be corrected, is forgivable. 😊

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Excellent!! ❤️

Best book I've read here so far! I love how the moral of the story is delivered. It makes me wonder how many Uncle Hermans are there in this world and hope that those people in need would find their own Picadilly. The book brought awareness to many societal and personal issues that gives reader glimpse of the struggles it comes with. ,❤️

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Inspiring

I love how it shows us that each of us can be blinded by insecurity, even if we think we don't let it affect us. We need to accept out flaws rather than ignoring it. We are all uniquely beautiful. ❤️

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LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!

I love how this is not some typical romance-drama story. It delves deeper into the character of someone who's been dealt with terrible cards and how it affected her. A very nice storyline of self discovery and acceptance. It would be nice to have a sequel on Blair and Andrew's life. But the ending is effective just as well. ❤️

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Lovely Book

I'm liking the storyline. I've read Beautiful Mistake an I can say I like the writing style. :)

I loved the book, it's sweet and simple. There were some technical errors along the way, which could be typographical.

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