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Meeting you

Great story! I loved the structure and development of the characters. I would say maybe a little more details on the characters would be even better. Some grammar mistakes but in all in all a great story. Great job

Psychic by Ts rose

Beautifully written! The grammar and punctuation was the best I've come across yet! The author knows how to make the characters complex and simple to read. The details and pace flowed flawlessly. Also, I dont know if it's a thing, but the author ended chapters right at the perfect time. Not too much or too little info by the end of each chapter. This author was able to brilliantly describe the indescribable. Great job! I enjoyed this read and will continue reading this book and anything else the author writes. Overall theres only one word out of the entire first chapter that I felt was unfitting and that was where alpha leaves the boys mind and says "BRAIN" "she left his brain" with the talent of words this author has I wished it had a bigger fancier word in its place to better describe what she just left. Other than that tiny little thing I'd call this damn near PERFECTION.

Obey

Wow! This author is a WORD GENIUS! I loved the Latin. You can tell this story is written by a very intelligent gifted writer. I found no grammatical errors. The author pulls you in and doesnt let go. The details and structure were perfect. I also loved the narrator which cam into place just as you were wondering about something the narrator would step in and offer the extra details you wanted to know. Very good job!

Lie

This author's writing is deep. The story draws tou in. So hold on to your hats! I meant to read a few chapters and ended up reading 10. They have a style that shows the details of the main character by the thoughts and self talk of the character. If that makes sense? Every action and thought of the character was right on point with the actions and thoughts of an abuse victim. It delved deeply into why the character viewed the world the way he did because of his homelife and treatment.The only thing I'd say needed some improvement was the authors way of transitioning the characters surroundings from one place to the other. There were very few grammatical errors. It's a very tough story to tell, I can tell this author worked hard on this story and did a great job at communicating the feelings of the character. The story left me wanting to hug Luc and be his friend. Great job!

Unforgettable love

This author captivates you from the start. The plot and pace of the story unfolding was excellent. I found almost zero grammatical errors and the details were significant. This author's writing style allows you to build a strong relationship with each character right from the start. My favorite part is when ximena turns into the "word samurai" and puts the racist bimbo in her place, I cheered her and felt what she felt as herself and her roommate Lucia.I also loved the amount of dialogue the author put into the story. Its left me wanting more. So overall great job!

Unexpected! Wow!

This story is captivating! I couldnt stop reading. I meant to read a few chapters and ended up half way through the book in one sitting. The author is talented on so many levels. The writing style was beautiful and immersive. I loved the way the author gave you more details and relationship support with the characters by showing the point of view of the "bad guy".The plot thickened at a wonderful pace. Theres only one little thing I wish there was more of at one part and that's when Rose noticed the rose, I wish she would have shown more surprise and deeper feelings into it. Other than that I would change nothing. I'm adding this story to my library and will continue reading. Very good job!

Mysterious roommate

This author knows how to keep things interesting. Very unique writing style where the characters come alive. There are tons of details and descriptive paragraphs that really help the reader connect with the story. There's a few grammatical errors but all in all it's a great book!

Into the void

WOW! This author is FANTASTIC! I havent got too far into the book,but I just had to stop to write this review.The writing style is so rich and clear and with such excellent details, I was completely immersed.The pace and dialogue are perfection. I forgot I was reading. The words jumped off the page and played like a movie in my mind. RARELY DO I FIND A BOOK LIKE THIS! I can count on one hand how many times I ever ran across an author that can transport you this deeply. I love books that do that to a reader. There was hardly an error in grammar. Nor even a dead moment of filler. I never tuned out. I couldnt find plot holes or confusion of any kind or missing details. This book has started with everything my horror loving heart desires. The author has set a bar and I actually think I'm a better writer after reading it. I will be reading more and will most likely write another review. I am thoroughly impressed. And very glad I ran across this author. FANTASTIC JOB!

I'm a what now?

This author has great imagination and the writing style is very unique. I think what the book is lacking some editing and punctuation. The beginning started very strong but then became a little hard to follow the characters. As far a story line it's great! It just needs some blending and clarity and grammar. It's a great story with good imagination. good job!! Keep going!

Nario

It's a great story. I'd love to know more about nario and why hes so crazy? There were grammatical errors that need to be fixed other than that it was very interesting. Absolutely no boring paragraphs. Great job