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A cool little hell (catchy title)

This was written so eloquently! The author pays close attention to details and knows exactly how much to give at the right times. The plot unfolded nicely and had a great pace. The writing style is deep. As close to perfection as it gets. I absolutely loved the names the author picked for the characters in this book. They were very old fashioned and unique "like dottie"which added so much character to the characters.lol. Over all very professionally written and an interesting read. I thourouly enjoyed it. Kudos to the author

Glombies!! From one zombie lover to another!

I gave 5 stars on everything! This author has a wonderful writing style. The style is immersive. This author has a wide range of vocabulary and the grammar was great. Very easy to follow the this writers story. The details and storyline were magnificent. Very inventive and great imagination! I loved it! Great job

Wow to The imperials demise

Holy cow! This author's way with words is mind-blowing! It's incredibly well written. It's Shakespearean in its own way and also understandable for the reader. The writing style is unlike any other style I've seen in inkitt. You feel completely captivated and immersed. The details and character development is seamless. I gave 5 stars on everything. The grammar and punctuation were some of the best I've seen yet. This author has mastered the craft of roping you in and keeping you right where they want you! I loved many sentences and descriptions in this story but this one I loved the most..." light fights to bloom into the concrete room" I probably didn't write it exactly but you know what I mean. Kudos to the author, It's just a small example of how amazing the author is. Great job ill be adding this story to my library and continue to read it!

Meeting you

Great story! I loved the structure and development of the characters. I would say maybe a little more details on the characters would be even better. Some grammar mistakes but in all in all a great story. Great job

Psychic by Ts rose

Beautifully written! The grammar and punctuation was the best I've come across yet! The author knows how to make the characters complex and simple to read. The details and pace flowed flawlessly. Also, I dont know if it's a thing, but the author ended chapters right at the perfect time. Not too much or too little info by the end of each chapter. This author was able to brilliantly describe the indescribable. Great job! I enjoyed this read and will continue reading this book and anything else the author writes. Overall theres only one word out of the entire first chapter that I felt was unfitting and that was where alpha leaves the boys mind and says "BRAIN" "she left his brain" with the talent of words this author has I wished it had a bigger fancier word in its place to better describe what she just left. Other than that tiny little thing I'd call this damn near PERFECTION.

Stripped roses! Wow i liked this story alot!

I read this story a few day ago and it stayed with me. The author has a real talent at nailing the feelings that one would have in the exact situation. I know many women have felt what Anna felt. The writing style was very clear and immersive. I felt like I was watching a movie and totally forgot I was reading. Those are my favorite type of readings. I really enjoyed this story

Immersive!!

This author draws you into the characters immediately. I felt attached to the main character in just a few paragraphs. Besides a few grammatical errors it's very well written. The writing style is very clear and concise. The more I read the more I wanted to keep reading. I love stories that draw you in like this! Great job!

Obey

Wow! This author is a WORD GENIUS! I loved the Latin. You can tell this story is written by a very intelligent gifted writer. I found no grammatical errors. The author pulls you in and doesnt let go. The details and structure were perfect. I also loved the narrator which cam into place just as you were wondering about something the narrator would step in and offer the extra details you wanted to know. Very good job!

Lie

This author's writing is deep. The story draws tou in. So hold on to your hats! I meant to read a few chapters and ended up reading 10. They have a style that shows the details of the main character by the thoughts and self talk of the character. If that makes sense? Every action and thought of the character was right on point with the actions and thoughts of an abuse victim. It delved deeply into why the character viewed the world the way he did because of his homelife and treatment.The only thing I'd say needed some improvement was the authors way of transitioning the characters surroundings from one place to the other. There were very few grammatical errors. It's a very tough story to tell, I can tell this author worked hard on this story and did a great job at communicating the feelings of the character. The story left me wanting to hug Luc and be his friend. Great job!

Unforgettable love

This author captivates you from the start. The plot and pace of the story unfolding was excellent. I found almost zero grammatical errors and the details were significant. This author's writing style allows you to build a strong relationship with each character right from the start. My favorite part is when ximena turns into the "word samurai" and puts the racist bimbo in her place, I cheered her and felt what she felt as herself and her roommate Lucia.I also loved the amount of dialogue the author put into the story. Its left me wanting more. So overall great job!

Unexpected! Wow!

This story is captivating! I couldnt stop reading. I meant to read a few chapters and ended up half way through the book in one sitting. The author is talented on so many levels. The writing style was beautiful and immersive. I loved the way the author gave you more details and relationship support with the characters by showing the point of view of the "bad guy".The plot thickened at a wonderful pace. Theres only one little thing I wish there was more of at one part and that's when Rose noticed the rose, I wish she would have shown more surprise and deeper feelings into it. Other than that I would change nothing. I'm adding this story to my library and will continue reading. Very good job!

Mysterious roommate

This author knows how to keep things interesting. Very unique writing style where the characters come alive. There are tons of details and descriptive paragraphs that really help the reader connect with the story. There's a few grammatical errors but all in all it's a great book!

Into the void

WOW! This author is FANTASTIC! I havent got too far into the book,but I just had to stop to write this review.The writing style is so rich and clear and with such excellent details, I was completely immersed.The pace and dialogue are perfection. I forgot I was reading. The words jumped off the page and played like a movie in my mind. RARELY DO I FIND A BOOK LIKE THIS! I can count on one hand how many times I ever ran across an author that can transport you this deeply. I love books that do that to a reader. There was hardly an error in grammar. Nor even a dead moment of filler. I never tuned out. I couldnt find plot holes or confusion of any kind or missing details. This book has started with everything my horror loving heart desires. The author has set a bar and I actually think I'm a better writer after reading it. I will be reading more and will most likely write another review. I am thoroughly impressed. And very glad I ran across this author. FANTASTIC JOB!

Nario

It's a great story. I'd love to know more about nario and why hes so crazy? There were grammatical errors that need to be fixed other than that it was very interesting. Absolutely no boring paragraphs. Great job